|Reviews for Sakura's Harem|
| Iniquitus goes Death chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Okey-dokey, time to stop flitting about and actually review this beast.
By a frigging SEQUENCE ANALYSIS method.
- Yeah, we need moar femmeslash. Never enough for me~.
- Desire of the Endless... No idea what that's from.
- Ranma? Haven't seen Ranma One Half if that's the reference, so this goes over my head.
- Tenchi? As in Tenchi Solution from TV Tropes?
(I know I'm deprived, stop laughing.)
- Hinata Sou? Why does that sound familiar? Dammit I should know this!
- Mahora Academy. Negima!, I know that mu-
WAIT. As in "will-turn-you-shota-Negi"?
Desire... Gives ability to become irresistible to women, then?
OH SHIT I'M RETARDED. Hinata-sou is from Love Hina.
So we have "turns you irresistible" "femmeslash" (from the A/N).
Ahem. Back to the review.
- Suddenly, Loli!Stalker!Sakura!
- "Putting the incomplete elements of this equation together, Desire jumped to absolutely the wrong conclusion."
This is gonna be good, I just know it.
- AND SO THE YURI GOODNESS BEGINS.
- Twin siblings?
Oh sh t. Sasuke's sister.
Let's see how you use her.
- - oh wait wat?
- Can't decide between "aw, acceptance" and "EW THIRTY-YEAR-OLD MUM WANTS LOLI!SAKURA".
- 'Captain! Our shields can't handle this level of preteen!yuri!fluff!'
(Is it weird that a guy says that?)
- Oh SNAP! Horny bitches got TOLD by icequeen!Ino.
- Actually, nvm.
- Secret crushes. :3
This fic is beginning to taste like diabeHNNNNNNNNNNNGH.
- Teen Titans was something I used to watch ages ago. Never really figured out the overall storyline.
- PFFFFFF ROBIN GENDERSWITCH. Don't know if want.
-Deactivating Comedy Review Mode-
Overall, flawless grammar and syntax, making it superior to eighty percent of all fanfiction already. A bit concisely written, but hey, keep the yuri coming (haha, I said 'coming') and it's fine.
TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
(Also, sorry about the memes and capslock abuse, it just seemed appropriate for this review.)
| Sakiba6609 chapter 3 . 5/24/2010
SakuHina!Aw Naive little Sakura.
| sayalovesdiva chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
So far so good. I love naruto yuri! I do know of a good sakura/tsunade fic. I can't remember what it's called but it's written by crazyninjapenguin.
| 1WiththeButterfly chapter 7 . 12/20/2009
Awesome. if it wasn't 3 in the morning i would be laughing so loudly that my roof would have cracked, rather than trying very hard to suppress my giggles
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
I can't wait to see Sasuke get castrated!
| TheWrittenJourney chapter 7 . 7/22/2009
that was hysterical!
| kag.san.in.love.4eva chapter 7 . 7/20/2009
im not gonna lie. I dont really like sakura. But this story had me rollin. i havnt laughed that hard in ages.
| Dr Gero chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
Well... that was rather abrupt.
It wasn't exactly a deep and dramatic story requiring an epic conclusion, sure, but... dang.
Ending aside it was a fun story.
| Dracowar chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
It had to end.
| Reverse Gravity chapter 5 . 7/10/2009
"Meanwhile, Death, Destiny, Dream, Despair, and Delirium were out shopping for their next sibling…"
Oh em gee. I just got it, (i think) and thats why "desire the endless" right? it's a sandman joke! i think (i've never accualy read sandman)... haha. this is just total crack, though i nearly snorted when i read all the girls chorusing back "f*ck you, sasuke" that's pretty great. I can't really say "wow amazing writing style and plot" but i can say it's pretty funny, which i beleive is the point.
| Amane Misa chapter 7 . 7/2/2009
what a deliriuos story, I love it!
Your mentioning to the situation in other universes/series was gave the fic a very nice touch.
| tatewaki2000 chapter 7 . 6/27/2009
so good. This fic is so f-ing good. This has to be the best! TUE BEST!
OMG! The best! I love this fic. muahahahaha!
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
ha! Sasuke's hated by the women! Serves him right! If he breaks Sakura-hime's heart I hope every girl in village casrates then painfully kills him!
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
Nice Sakura is th most desired gilr in the village! Finally! And Naruto's popular because he defends sakura! I love this fic! #Two thumbs up!#
| Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
this is awesome!