Reviews for Sakura's Harem
Veryfairygirl14 chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
Iniquitus goes Death chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Okey-dokey, time to stop flitting about and actually review this beast.

By a frigging SEQUENCE ANALYSIS method.


- Yeah, we need moar femmeslash. Never enough for me~.

- Desire of the Endless... No idea what that's from.

- Ranma? Haven't seen Ranma One Half if that's the reference, so this goes over my head.

- Tenchi? As in Tenchi Solution from TV Tropes?

(I know I'm deprived, stop laughing.)

- Hinata Sou? Why does that sound familiar? Dammit I should know this!

- Mahora Academy. Negima!, I know that mu-

WAIT. As in "will-turn-you-shota-Negi"?

Desire... Gives ability to become irresistible to women, then?

OH SHIT I'M RETARDED. Hinata-sou is from Love Hina.

So we have "turns you irresistible" "femmeslash" (from the A/N).



Ahem. Back to the review.

- Suddenly, Loli!Stalker!Sakura!

- "Putting the incomplete elements of this equation together, Desire jumped to absolutely the wrong conclusion."

This is gonna be good, I just know it.


- Twin siblings?

Oh sh t. Sasuke's sister.


Let's see how you use her.

- - oh wait wat?

- Can't decide between "aw, acceptance" and "EW THIRTY-YEAR-OLD MUM WANTS LOLI!SAKURA".

- 'Captain! Our shields can't handle this level of preteen!yuri!fluff!'


(Is it weird that a guy says that?)

- Oh SNAP! Horny bitches got TOLD by icequeen!Ino.

- Actually, nvm.

- Secret crushes. :3

This fic is beginning to taste like diabeHNNNNNNNNNNNGH.

- Teen Titans was something I used to watch ages ago. Never really figured out the overall storyline.


-Deactivating Comedy Review Mode-

Overall, flawless grammar and syntax, making it superior to eighty percent of all fanfiction already. A bit concisely written, but hey, keep the yuri coming (haha, I said 'coming') and it's fine.


(Also, sorry about the memes and capslock abuse, it just seemed appropriate for this review.)
Sakiba6609 chapter 3 . 5/24/2010
SakuHina!Aw Naive little Sakura.
sayalovesdiva chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
So far so good. I love naruto yuri! I do know of a good sakura/tsunade fic. I can't remember what it's called but it's written by crazyninjapenguin.
1WiththeButterfly chapter 7 . 12/20/2009

Awesome. if it wasn't 3 in the morning i would be laughing so loudly that my roof would have cracked, rather than trying very hard to suppress my giggles
Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 4 . 10/3/2009
I can't wait to see Sasuke get castrated!
TheWrittenJourney chapter 7 . 7/22/2009
that was hysterical! chapter 7 . 7/20/2009
im not gonna lie. I dont really like sakura. But this story had me rollin. i havnt laughed that hard in ages.
Dr Gero chapter 7 . 7/14/2009
Well... that was rather abrupt.

It wasn't exactly a deep and dramatic story requiring an epic conclusion, sure, but... dang.

Ending aside it was a fun story.
Dracowar chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
It had to end.
Reverse Gravity chapter 5 . 7/10/2009
"Meanwhile, Death, Destiny, Dream, Despair, and Delirium were out shopping for their next sibling…"

Oh em gee. I just got it, (i think) and thats why "desire the endless" right? it's a sandman joke! i think (i've never accualy read sandman)... haha. this is just total crack, though i nearly snorted when i read all the girls chorusing back "f*ck you, sasuke" that's pretty great. I can't really say "wow amazing writing style and plot" but i can say it's pretty funny, which i beleive is the point.
Amane Misa chapter 7 . 7/2/2009

what a deliriuos story, I love it!

Your mentioning to the situation in other universes/series was gave the fic a very nice touch.

well done!
tatewaki2000 chapter 7 . 6/27/2009
so good. This fic is so f-ing good. This has to be the best! TUE BEST!

OMG! The best! I love this fic. muahahahaha!
Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
ha! Sasuke's hated by the women! Serves him right! If he breaks Sakura-hime's heart I hope every girl in village casrates then painfully kills him!
Mystic 6 tailed Naruto chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
Nice Sakura is th most desired gilr in the village! Finally! And Naruto's popular because he defends sakura! I love this fic! #Two thumbs up!#
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