|Reviews for Just and Magnificent|
| Jac7 chapter 38 . 9/30
Hi there! I am quite late seeing as you finished this story ages ago but a friend of mine only recommended this fanfiction to me so..
I was like right even though it's not the fandom and pairing I would usually go dor I gonna read this to see what my friend is on about and i gotta say WOW
It was absolutely amazing I could not put it a way it was that good!,
And i only finished it as well and there a literally tears running down my face whilst I'm typing this
I think everyones Heart broke at this ending.
Even though it is not what majority would see in the end jt was the perfect sad ending jn my opinion.
So what i just wanted to say is THANK YOU for this stprynit was absolutely incredible and I am happy that i checked it out
On a side note even though you haven't posted anything about this story recently i would love to see a sequel to this story
Maybe with the Prince Caspian
Or what happens when they got called by Caspian? What about Edmund? Can they get in touch somehow?
That would be really nice and i cannot stop thinking about this so
Maybe if you won't start a sequel about this kind of thing would it be possible for someone else (even me if I find the time of day ) to right a sequel about it (obviously giving credits to you)
Ok I stop my rant now and borrow myself in tissues
Thank you so much
| imthealpha chapter 3 . 6/13
don't ya just love it when you have no clue what the heck is happing
| imthealpha chapter 1 . 6/13
the sacrifice of angels part is way better than the movie or the book
| Kaite kudasai chapter 38 . 4/6
This is one of the best fanfic I've ever read. I've read this in one sitting, really. Angst? struggles? sorta tragic? I'm your man. Thank you so much for this heartwarming yet heartbreaking story. I cannot thank you enough. And really, I just love Edmund. Everything about him from his flaws to his selflessness, I could kiss him from head to toe. But we all know Edmund belongs to Peter and Peter alone, brother or lover. Excuse me as I pick up my shattered heart or whatever remains of it on the floor.
| annabel7777 chapter 1 . 1/17
This whole story is AMAZING! Every time I read the last chapter, it makes me cry.
| PPMPPM chapter 17 . 10/15/2016
Edmund the just as nervous LOL I love it
| Anonymous chapter 38 . 7/24/2016
I don't usually write reviews for stories (this is actually my first review), but I really wanted to let you know that your writing was just magnificent (wordplay) and it moved me to a lot of tears. (Not sure if you'll read this since it was last updated 10 years ago, though I do hope you will revisit this and see the compliments that I hence offer.) I couldn't stop reading from the first chapter to the end, and as a hardcore shipper of Peter x Edmund, this story is one of my favourite fan fiction. Probably my very favourite. The banter between them, the war scenes, the fights, the sadness, the well thought out plot.. everything was extremely exquisite. You may be sure I will continue on to read other side series, and definitely reread this when I have the time. The plot was just amazing. I was enraptured by every single word. You are a brilliant writer. Thank you for touching my heart. Though, when Aslan talked about a lifetime, I did expect it to be longer than just 13 years. I must say, the ending broke my heart, and I just broke down and bawled and cried. It does remind me of how fantasy and all good things come to an end, and the harsh truth of reality. I have so much more to say, so many more compliments to give, but as I have just finished the whole series I am in serious emotional turmoil right now. Thank you so much, for such a great story. (If you wrote your own books and series, I would definitely purchase them.)
| Guest chapter 38 . 7/2/2015
Your story is really good. The kings survived all those battles and we're taken down by the wardrobe. It made me emotional. Truly it is a great story.
| NatalieMcLarent chapter 18 . 3/22/2015
It's sooo amazing! The plot is brilliant and it makes me so difficult to be bored. Well, I know that incest is forbidden, but I don't mind reading one, cuz this story is AWESOME! Besides, it's FANFICTION nd everything is possible ;)
| X1X2X3X chapter 38 . 12/21/2014
I read this fanfic years ago, and a gave you a review with other account, because this account is relatively new...but I still waiting for Beyond Magnificent and Just Peter Pevensie, 7 years after that I read JAM for the first time...
| shinee1234 chapter 38 . 1/31/2014
This story is just magnificent. I do not regret reading this, as it was full of so many emotions and amazing plots that it was a pleasure to read. Their love was absolutely heartwarming and happy. I knew this ending would come and thought I'd be ready but NOO i have just cried BUCKETS because of this. I know it wouldn't do to have another end because of the story. But i feel my heart squeeze just thinking about it. Once again, you are a wonderful writer and great thanks for this story.
| Bronkwin2 chapter 38 . 12/29/2012
You say that you suck as an author, because you get too emotionally invested in your stories let me tell you that this is false. Your investment in your stories are what makes them the masterpieces that they are, to make your reader cheer in celebration and cry in grief is what makes you a brilliant author. This is what makes your stories the masterpieces that they are. No matter how many times I read this story I still break down in tears and this is the sign of a true author.
| thisisaloadofbull chapter 38 . 7/14/2012
ASDFGHJKL! I CRIED SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I CRIED ALL THE TEARS SIR/MADAM, ALL OF THEM. Loved the story by the way, and yeah, cried at least three times about every chapter. This is great stuff, bro. ; _;
| marble-fire chapter 38 . 2/5/2012
*sobs* WHA-? That was *sniff* SO SAD! UGH! YOU HAD ME IN TEARS BY THE END OF IT! D': I loved this story, usually I am not one for incest but the amazingness of you story help me put away my differences and I have to admit, I'm glad I did. I LOVED IT (though the ending and Edmund's final death make me depressed...) I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT I cannot express how much I do, BUT THE ENDING! EDMUND! ORRIN! WHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY?
*sobs some more*
| eyefucker chapter 38 . 7/6/2011
I love you for writing this