Reviews for Close Up
White Alchemist Taya chapter 3 . 3/17/2006

i like where this is going!


scaring li with a video of eriol.


update soon!
Sighcoe chapter 3 . 3/16/2006
nice! please update soon.. i'll be waiting..
Nightglider chapter 3 . 3/15/2006
*eyes you suspiciously*


What are you on about? _O
JusT LooKing ArounD chapter 3 . 3/15/2006
that was great! but unfortunately... im a slow person... i didn't quite understand whether Tomoyo and Eriol are together or not...

anyway.. update!
thousandbirds chapter 3 . 3/15/2006
Lol...i found that amusing and sorry for no individual review...just found this fic actually and update soon.
Dana Daidouji chapter 3 . 3/11/2006

This chapter is adorable! I really, really liked it. If Syaoran hadn't said it, I wouldn't have thought that those two had a relationship... Though what Tomoyo said in the previous chapter might had enlightened me. Your portrayal of them is truly marvelous. Please update soon!
rai17 chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
arigato for the dedix...

that really meant a lot to me...
CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
I liked this story. It's cute.
Story Weaver1 chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
LOL! Now I see just how annoyed Syaoran's going to be with his present. That bath scene was shall I say Tastfully suggestive
tranquility8 chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
nice...i guess this is more to a eriol and tomoyo fic. but i like it.
Sheo Darren chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
“The three of you take a bath together?” she exclaimed, wide-eyed.

“There’s always a room for four,” said Eriol slyly to the camera, as if talking to an imaginary Syaoran who would be watching the video.


" minuscule fabric covering his manly flesh..."


“Oh my, I can’t reach that part again!”

Her eyebrow arched.

“Daidouji-san, would you be a sweetheart and help me soap that part?”


Ah, hah. Syao-chan. Ikaw, ha. May sikretong pagkamanyak ka pala. Gumagaya ka na sa akin. Bad influence talaga ak- oops, said something I shouldn't have. _

Irresistibly cute! Especially Tomoyo-chama. All sorts of interesting possibilities in this chapter-

Jess: "Kuya..." -_-'

Ehehehehehe. Kyut pa rin. (Kahit loko-loko din pala si Eriol, wakekekeke.) Definitely. A nice chappie! _

Ah, Tomoyo-hime-chama...
Super Sashimi chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
wow... who knew that eriol could be so bad... great chapter.. though i think you should change the rating to T coz of the few swear words inside... _
Araanaz chapter 3 . 3/9/2006
Gotta love this! The plot thickens. More more more, please! This is fabulous, but I wouldn't expect anything less from you. *winks*
Kuro Chocobo chapter 3 . 3/9/2006
Wow. Watching Eriol-kun in the bath. Wow.

Mou, can't wait for the next chapter!
m4ngo chapter 3 . 3/9/2006
interesting story!
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