Reviews for Come Back to Me
DanniDoodle19 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Sachicolate chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
OMG it was really great poor Ren he was lonely as the Shaman king
kovodelnik chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
ehm.. Once Ive clicked on this story, I decided to give you a comment (you maybe could think another flame XD) the reported speech is quite confusing.. have you read it at least once again after you wrote it?
Micuko chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Oo, so cool, I love Hao and Ren, wow
selena23loveless chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
Mi hau!Ghici cine -a placut atat de mult fiction-ul tau!Desi am fost socata putin-Len si Hao,shonnen ai-m-a impresionat si a fost super!Cum plange Len si Hao il tine in brate,cum s-a schimbat Hao(mi-a placut replica:" are you and what have you done with Hao?),cat de mult tin unul la povestea in sine mi-a placut.

La inceput am fost putin derutata,nu stiam unde sa plasez actiunea si de ce era Len necajit;abia dupa aceea am vrei sa incepi cu un mic background,sa nu fie si altii ,stii cum se spune-Everyone is a ti-am spus asta ca sa te f frumoasa imaginatia,sa ma anunti cand mai scrii!Si data viitoare spune-mi daca este shonnen ai,sa ma pregatesc sufleteste...
xXxchiixXx chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
um. hi.

there are on speechmarks?

i liked the plot and story.

you deffo have some good ideas.

maybe if you structered it a little differently,

it would be a lot easier,

and a lot more enjoyable to read.

i see a lot of potential to improve.

don't class this as a flame, as i truly like dit.

but you really could do so much better!

-gives cookies-

i hope you take at least some of my advice.

i look forward to a another chapter soon.

love me