|Reviews for Come Back to Me|
| DanniDoodle19 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
SOOOOOOOOOOO CCCCCUUUUUTTTTTEEEEE! I love yaoi way too much...
| Sachicolate chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
OMG it was really great poor Ren he was lonely as the Shaman king
| kovodelnik chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
ehm.. Once Ive clicked on this story, I decided to give you a comment (you maybe could think another flame XD) the reported speech is quite confusing.. have you read it at least once again after you wrote it?
| Micuko chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Oo, so cool, I love Hao and Ren, wow
| selena23loveless chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
Mi hau!Ghici cine -a placut atat de mult fiction-ul tau!Desi am fost socata putin-Len si Hao,shonnen ai-m-a impresionat si a fost super!Cum plange Len si Hao il tine in brate,cum s-a schimbat Hao(mi-a placut replica:" are you and what have you done with Hao?),cat de mult tin unul la povestea in sine mi-a placut.
La inceput am fost putin derutata,nu stiam unde sa plasez actiunea si de ce era Len necajit;abia dupa aceea am vrei sa incepi cu un mic background,sa nu fie si altii ,stii cum se spune-Everyone is a ti-am spus asta ca sa te f frumoasa imaginatia,sa ma anunti cand mai scrii!Si data viitoare spune-mi daca este shonnen ai,sa ma pregatesc sufleteste...
| xXxchiixXx chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
there are on speechmarks?
i liked the plot and story.
you deffo have some good ideas.
maybe if you structered it a little differently,
it would be a lot easier,
and a lot more enjoyable to read.
i see a lot of potential to improve.
don't class this as a flame, as i truly like dit.
but you really could do so much better!
i hope you take at least some of my advice.
i look forward to a another chapter soon.