Reviews for Broken Words
Soleya chapter 1 . 5/20
Gah, this is so good!
SpyotaT'Val chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
sigh... I find myself adding just so many of your story's to my favorites. ... you are so talented!
Sumanira chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
You're really really the best Stargate author ever ever, there aren't words to say, how brilliant all your Storys are, amazing, you made me cry, thanks Susann
Miko Eiko chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
this fic made me cry
ShoeQueen chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
OMG! Fems recommended this today on Twitter for her #StargateSJficrec (yep, that's a thing). Of course since it came from Fems, I had to read it right away. This is simply brilliant. Poor Jack! So much sadness and angst. Poor Carter! So much to process. Seriously, this is fantastic. What a great story with an unexpected twist. Man, I love your writing.
DiamondFish chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Great idea for a story. Well writen. I could really picture Sam & Jack acting this way given such a circumstance.
Vdubbya chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Really powerful, beautiful and stunning... Such a good story. I love Jack angst...
Kariesue chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Wow! Really nice! Sam and Jack always made me so sad that they couldn't show their true feelings for each other. I always keep in my head that after he retired they DID get together. Thanks for giving us this!
bellatrix4574 chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I am so over come with emotion. What a beautiful written story. It is rare indeed to find a story so captivating but so still. You did an excellent job of using a few sharp, well defined images to create something complete. I really loved this work. Thank you.
Kathryn Shadow chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Aww. I quite liked that one.
karen2001 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
great story...lost a few tears to it. Thank You
Ellana-san chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
It's beautiful! Those stories of yours are reaaly great!
Newbie GK chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
I was reading through some of your older works when I stumbled across this story. I just wanted to say that I found it truly beautiful. The sadness radiating from the alternate Jack haunts the reader while the hope between the real Jack and Carter revives the reader. Amazing work.
Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
This was so beautifully written. The emotions were painfully apparant. A convincing way to show those two that they need to get their act together!
Linwe Elendil chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
Alight - so I'm crying. That never happens to me! I just love how you've written this, especially the fact that you've kept everything so well in character. That Sam and Jack know exactly how they feel about each other, but still can't do anything about it.

I really loved the line "In a strange way, they had both died today.

And yet, here they were, mourning the person who stood alive, easily within reach."

Honest and beautiful. I could go on gushing but I'll spare you... only one thing left to do.

*Adds story to favorites.*
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