Reviews for A Change in History
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 13 . 1/18
I am surprised that you haven't made Bella all motherly... I mean...crazy and mocking as it may be, she DID act an aweful lot like someone cooing a young child in the movies, and there are those theories of her being unable to have children. (Tho it may just as easilly be that the only child she wants to have is Voldemorts, she DOES have a huuuuge crush on him, that is plain as day. And it's not because of his looks either. A chance to play mother to his child I would have expected her to jump at, if awkwardly and compleatly inapropriate. Lol)

...he really should have taught Harry how to resurect him... He has both the power and the means to do so.
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 12 . 1/18
Why did you decide to have Harry not tell his surname? Is it because he doesn't know what it is? Seeing as I doubt his father would have used -his- surname. Tho he could have used Gaunt or Slythering I suppose, but it wouldn't have been actually legal name. (Even by magic.) So I imagine his name is now Harry Riddle. But Harry doesn't know that, does he?
Flakey42 chapter 12 . 8/20/2017
Ugh, sometimes I haaaaaaaaaate Draco... -_-
Captain Sea chapter 14 . 8/10/2017
Dark side because they have cookies.
LittleMeowMoo chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
Snow in July?
Okay, I know the weather in the UK is bad, but it isn't that bad!
Flakey47 chapter 15 . 7/8/2017
Alright, I'm confused. It says that this story is complete, and yet it just ends off here. Is there a sequel or something? I'm sorry if I'm just being an idiot...
Love2read23 chapter 15 . 7/6/2017
Thank you for writing. I can't wait for what is next.
Love2read23 chapter 12 . 7/6/2017
I don't think you've thrown in as many tricky plot twists as you think you have. It seems pretty straight forward with Harry being adopted by the Dark Lord and trained by his Death Eaters. The only real twist is Chris but then it again that's a basic Wrong-Boy-Who-Lived plot. The Potters are even predictable in their unrealistic cavalier hatred toward their oldest child. You just seemed pretty prideful of yourself in the A/N and while it's a good story, I wouldn't say that you're awesome at tricky plot twists. Also, the Snape light/dark question is brought up more in your A/N's than the story. It's not really that big of deal or that suspenseful as you are trying to make it out to be with in your comments. Regardless you're doing a good job and it's a good story. You did really well with Draco. He's such a prat. I wish Harry had put him in his place better considering the way Draco spoke to him. Rastaban is great. Thanks for writing.
Love2read23 chapter 9 . 7/6/2017
Harry is only six? Okay. I am glad to have that answered. i must have misunderstood the first chapter. Everything makes sense now. Thank you. Gruesome ceremonial chamber. It's gore doesn't much make sense though. I mean why would you have chains were you perform blood adoptions and marriages. Unless it's really a ritual chamber where sacrifices are performed instead. But I am excited that Tom let Harry call him Father. Now, I can't wait for some snuggles. Please?
Love2read23 chapter 4 . 7/6/2017
How could Harry be punished when he was three for saying something about him being better than Christ when Christ wouldn't be born for two more years? I do so hope that the library get repaired. I dislike the destruction of books. Yay for super powerful awesome Harry. How does Harry have parseltongue if he's not a horcrux?
Love2read23 chapter 2 . 7/6/2017
How old exactly is Harry? Because from the year (1986) he should only be 6 and if Chris is five years younger than him then Chris is 1. But Harry seems too autonomous in picking his clothes and his interest in books to only be six. Furthermore, he thinks about how he's been ignored for the last four years so Chris is four and Harry is nine, is that right?
Love2read23 chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
Why is it snowing in July? I understand English weather is dreary but snow? July and August are the more muggy and warm months of the year. Unless you're saying this is a magical forest that is just always snowy.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/27/2017
Oh god, he's not dead, thank goodness
Guest chapter 13 . 6/27/2017
ifctbmaker chapter 15 . 6/3/2017
I'm dead. So many amazing, unfinished fan fictions. I've waited so long. Plz update before I fade away.
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