Reviews for The Best Birthday Present
Tarix chapter 6 . 5/27
Great story, such a pity it will be never finished. And ending with such cliffhanger.
strawberryshortcake16 chapter 7 . 2/18
omfg write more now
strawberryshortcake16 chapter 5 . 2/18
uh huh this my shit all the girls go huh like this cuz i aint no hollaback girl
DQ chapter 1 . 2/16
Quick question: How can Voldemort go deathly pale? His skin is already chalk white.
Free as the Birds chapter 7 . 1/11
This was a really good story. Unfortunately, this chapter just wasn't as good as the others, what with the sudden rift that formed between Harry and the Potters and Blacks. Narcissa and Rodolphus was also out of character. And I didn't really like the thought of Harry drinking that much firewhiskey, but never mind...I really enjoyed the first few chapters, so I hope you would be able to update in the future and write up to the same standard.
m chapter 4 . 1/5
Harry is depicted well... Very well written!
sfjoellen chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
great fight scene..
EmptySurface chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
The mention of- and dialog with Ginny seemed odd to me, but I'll withhold my final impression for now. :)
Theblackbook chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
Awsome fighting scene!
saashi samy chapter 7 . 6/5/2013
interesting
saashi samy chapter 4 . 6/5/2013
fantastic end
saashi samy chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
interesting end
saashi samy chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
interesting idea
StarWarsWicked chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Nessarose like from Wicked? That is awesome!
Reviewer chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
Never mind my review, this story is from 7 years ago... damn. That's a long time..
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