Reviews for The Beginning of the End
GamerGirl chapter 22 . 1/31/2015
Gotta love Within Temptation xD GG on that
tvfanatic64 chapter 23 . 7/1/2006
really good story, but it could be a little bit better if you added a last chapter mourning wise or something of the sort, the end didn't seem complete enough to me. but hey, kudos on the story
Kiara'sTwin chapter 23 . 7/1/2006
cynic11 chapter 23 . 7/1/2006
Crazy ending. Thanks for finishing it. That doesn't happen very often. Are you going to work on a new project now or are you done?
The Dark Feline chapter 21 . 6/7/2006
Sorry it took me more than a day to review... on the other one. So keep going and don't stop for a few months like last time. But like always ur story scored a 100 on a scale of 1-10!
The Dark Feline chapter 20 . 6/7/2006
phoenixphantasy chapter 20 . 6/6/2006
the only thing that annoys me, is the songs you putm in... it kinda deracts the reader if you know what i mean... you should put them in the song section... love the story though!
phoenixphantasy chapter 17 . 6/6/2006
that's kinda funny that you brought elecktra into your story... but wouldn't that go under "daredevil"? :)
phoenixphantasy chapter 15 . 6/6/2006
nice! really putting out her character!
phoenixphantasy chapter 14 . 6/6/2006
question! exatcly when is this taking place? (before/after which movie?)
phoenixphantasy chapter 13 . 6/6/2006
i love your story! the only problem is that the chapters are too shot and it's not very detailive. if you worked a little hard on those, it would turn into an even more incredible story. don't worry people are reading your story; some people just don't like putting input on every story that they read,(some don't do it period) but I'm sure that there are people out there that like it more than they're letting on. :)
shortbutlethal chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
yay i like this! will definitely be reading the rest of these chapters soon!
Mr. Typo chapter 19 . 3/29/2006
LOL! Really good story!
Dashaaaaa chapter 19 . 3/20/2006
you can do it!

write another chapter. write. write. write.


On to the Favourite Stories List for you if it helps you find the imagination for another chapter.

goodluck with that :)
Wen1 chapter 19 . 3/20/2006
well, yet, you'll have to explain why the simple fact that Scott had laid a hand on Elektra shoulder was making Jean so mad, that's a track for your continuation

Carry on


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