|Reviews for Fate Accompli|
| Oblight chapter 1 . 1/26
This is SO good. Made me cry, too, when I realized just how twisted Ed's mind had become! O.O
I know it would have been a lot of work, but I /really/, really wish you had decided to write it as a longer fiction. There are so many places that would have been benefited from being fleshed out. Ah...
I really love your work, though. Looking forward to reading more!
| Tatokat chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I would put this story into my favorites but ... Ed scares me. O_o
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Wow. This is awesome too. The idea you were playing with, that Ed doesn't care about anything at all except for Al, not himself, not his needs or his life, or the life of others as long as Al's okay, is something that gets hinted at in the show, but never to this extent. Not to the point where he becomes obsessively crazy about it. Several parts of this story had me scared of Ed. Your descriptions were pretty freaky, especially in the scene when Roy realized that he could hide his madness perfectly because he'd studied how. Gained more time. To run away and destroy himself to fix Al up for good. And although there was some hairy stuff there with the blackmail and the bombs and his body falling to pieces, I'm really glad you were able to have it end as happily as it did. :)
| Sylvr chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Holy Nuclear Fusion, Batman! (Or possibly fission, but I'd guess fusion.) A really great fic. Thanks for writing!
| Pandakeen chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
Amazing job! It made my eyes tear up a little at one point.
Nuclear Energy. Possibly, it is the element Radium.
| SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I can't say that I've ever read a fic quite like this before... and I've read a lot of fics.
| Noirink chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
This is purely a guess, but I suppose he could've used radiation or radioactive stuff to power that stone. I dunno, I just kinda thought radioactive energy could do a lot of damage to the body if you are exposed to it a lot. *shrugs* Cool story. :D
| laughingst chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
VERY nice! This was very scientific and well-written. Good job!
| JL chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
I LOVED this! Turning ed insane was a nice touch. Keep writing
| Mahaad chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Ow. My head. The pure AWESOMENESS that is this story is barely comprehendable. Psycho Ed funny Ed is a strange combination indeed. This is quite a well plotted and researched story. A fascinating read.
| Orange Singer chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Whoa...this was freaky and disturbing and nauseating and awesome. The list of adjectives could continue for a very very very long time. Edward's insanity was very clearly shown in the scene with Roy at the beginning. While the POV was third person, I really like how Edward was referred to by the name the character he was speaking with usually calls him (Havoc: Elric. Roy: Fullmetal.) The disease is horrifying...Ed's change and behavior is so baffling. Wow. Excellent job!
| Griselda Banks chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
Wow. You're really good at this dark, weird stuff, aren't you? XD This captivated my attention just like "Night at the Pound," and it gave me chills all the way down my spine. I don't really feel like I can put into words what this fic has done to me. I guess all I can really say is that I LOVE it.
You're an amazing author. I hope you keep writing, because we could all benefit from writing such as yours _
| chalicity chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
disturbing and intriguing! a very interesting read indeed!
| kelol chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Uh...Interesting, but very good. I can't imagine Al 30 though. It's angers me so. I liked it over all, but i did get confused.
| Amayada chapter 1 . 4/10/2007