Reviews for Great, Our Captain’s Possessed by a Butterfly
scatteredPhilosopher chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
The butterfly part could have been elaborated on a bit more, but other than that it was hilarious. (Even though I didn't completely understand who Usa and Ko were, I just went along with it.) (Also that part when Miroku got slapped a bunch. That was perfect.)
Meteor Gin chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
the maroku part's not great, but i love the idea, when i first read your title i thought it would be about luffy being possed by a 'evil' (or jest plain sienile) butterfly, who dreams of concering the world! how funny would that be~!
YuriFan5 chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Ok, I wasn't quite expecting that, but it was definitely entertaining enough to be worth the few minutes I spent reading it.
real life sucks chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
are you going to write the sequel?

Hope you do(or did?)
M.R.Writer chapter 1 . 4/18/2008
I could easily see this happening. It would be just like Luffy to end up with a butterfly possessing him.
DeadlyIrkenGirl chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Wow that story was awesome and funny i fell off of my chair _ lol could you do another chapter please?
Amaya Zorifuki chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
Hee hee hee, funny!

I love the crossover, and eagerly await your other works. (The one piece ones, I'm not much of a pokemon-er)

You make me laugh, and that is a precious gift. Woot!
giddyY2K6 chapter 1 . 2/27/2006
dude have u been possesed by freakin butterflies

or somat? coz this story woz crap!

please DONT update!

and stop callin sanji a pervert ok!

hes not a pervert at all!


p. ur stories are crap. usa n ko or woteva

there called are rubbish charaters-especially the ko


look im not trying 2 be nasty... im makin a point!

im surprised no-one has commented on the fact that u always call sanji-kun!

if any1 else has im totally grateful!

come bak wen u actually write a good story

Angel of Atonement chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
“Anyway all depends on the money…” said Miroku.


“Okay, as long he isn’t a wanted man” said Miroku.


“Okay, as long as you stop slapping me!” said Miroku.


“Okay, okay, I’ll do it for free!” said Miroku.

That made the entire thing worth reading. I was laughing so hard at that last slap. I loved it.

I thougth the butterfly thing could be shown a bit mor ebut since this was a oneshot I guess there wasn't really much point.

Besides, those slaps were the real point of the stoy. In my opinion anyway.

Zolo. Stupid 4Kids...