|Reviews for Legacy across time: the last beserker|
| Diasuke chapter 8 . 9/30/2011
I LOVE IT BETTER COME BACK WITH A NEW CHAPTER QUICK!
| Haruka Munashii chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
You really should get yourself a Beta.
| something541 chapter 8 . 10/28/2007
aw! any chance you;ll be updating any time soon?
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 8 . 11/17/2006
that is so cute!
| Panpanpan chapter 7 . 11/10/2006
I cant wait!
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 7 . 11/7/2006
that is so cute! all of the chapter was!
| Panpanpan chapter 6 . 11/7/2006
I luv your story so you better update soon. .
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and come join the dark side.
| Kureneko chapter 6 . 9/23/2006
OMG! LEFT ALL ALONE WITH UNDERWEARLESS SPANDEX MUSHROOM MAN, AND SHE'S FALLING.. ASLEEP! 0
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 6 . 9/23/2006
woah, so much fan girls.
hope she gets out of there.
| Gaara's-pandachan101 chapter 6 . 9/23/2006
nice story. i cant wait until the next chapter!
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 5 . 8/12/2006
she's going shopping!
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 4 . 6/11/2006
i like it.
never thoght that the yondaime asked her to look after naruto.
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 3 . 4/23/2006
| MikoHatome chapter 2 . 3/10/2006
a little short...but
i liked it a lot! plz
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 2 . 3/8/2006
could you explain the situation pls. has sasuke already gone off to orochimaru?
um... if this was your first ficcy it is understandable.
and to make sure that it goes well have one of your friends check your chapter first maybe even ask a few people for some ideas.
it doesn't matter if you are a bad writer (i don't think you are but just don't have enough practice) just have someone to go over the chapters with you.
this is just some advice. i'm not sure if it would help but its worth a try.
by the way, the story is going good.
(just more practice.)
p.s if you went help just message me anytime.