Reviews for The Chimera: More Snake than Lion
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 3/11
Dear Apocalypso:

So I just saw this exact chapter, with this exact title, posted by one Harry Kane in the Just In section, and I was going to make this wry little comment about "what about the goat?", but then I scrolled a little further down and found a couple other stories on the Just In section by this same writer, which I knew I'd seen before. Suspicious, I went and checked to see if this story also existed elsewhere, and, lo and behold, here it was.

So a couple questions. Did you, in fact, give Harry Kane permission to repost this story under his own name, with no attribution? If so, why? And (since I am not to be denied my fun) what about the goat?

Sincerely,
Qoheleth
StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 1/18
A large portion of this chapter was useless, you could cut a lot of it out and it wouldn't effect the story at all. Then you ended it with a retarded coincidence... Really?... Whatever, I just checked and saw when the last update was, so I'm going to go ahead and drop this anyway.
Darth66 chapter 5 . 12/19/2015
Chapter 5 is an absolute NO and not to do again in my books but everyone is different
Trance20666 chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
so the armband is not a glamour or a illusions?
he psychically changes?
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thought Harry was 16,going on 17.
if he's going be 18,than didn't he already read maturity?
of maybe it doesn't count for some reason.
Trance
Dars D. Devillions chapter 8 . 9/24/2014
why put a adventure in genre if its all about romance,
ToddGilliss chapter 8 . 9/18/2014
time to come back to this one
mrwelsh24 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
when are you going to update this is a good story
Guest chapter 8 . 1/1/2014
It's a shame...I do not particularly favor Tonks, I find her detestable...able to morph into any form she wished...without identity to call her own, what is she?

Cho I must say acted like Su Li, who I quite adore...

Chinese fetish maybe...
Philosophize chapter 8 . 11/11/2013
Please come back to update... This has been a really good story!
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 8 . 10/8/2013
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
XMatchBookX chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
Just ruined the entire story completely with this chapter. Fuck you man.
MAU2015 chapter 8 . 4/5/2013
cool story
atokkota chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
Will you ever finish this fix?
MichaeltheReader chapter 8 . 12/27/2012
Wick story bro! Try and update bait early and congrats for getting engaged. :D
CazPeak chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
You claim that Tonks is one of Rowlings "most exciting, vibrant character in her books together" - yet your version seems pretty lacking. She sneaks into Harry's room, pervs on a naked 16 year old (she doesn't know his "real age", which I suspect in itself is a ruse to make readers somehow excuse her actions), faints every time you turnaround - over some pretty non-faintworthy reasons I might add - and seems to take the back seat, not even taking her role as auror seriously til she is reminded of it. Disappointing character development so far.

Adding this story as a fave, but not sure yet if I'll keep it.
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