Reviews for If Only
Spoiled Martian chapter 2 . 5/19/2006
Oh, I love this fanfic of yours! You are thinking outside of the box and even though you use dialouge from the game you add actions to what they say. It makes it flow better and...I really like this! Continue.
boredaurorchick chapter 2 . 3/7/2006
Awesome so far. I just recently got into Jade Empire and played through as Ling. Sadly, I haven't been able to find many fics with her and Sky as the main characters. Brilliant idea though, having Pinmei still be alive. I have to admit, I never thought of that. I hope you continue with this soon...
PhoenixWriter7 chapter 2 . 3/1/2006
Great AU. Looking forward to the next segment.
Bard of Orlais chapter 2 . 2/28/2006
Quite an uniquely interesting time setting you've chosen for this story, as I never considered the AU device where Pinmei might still be alive. I look forward to seeing where you're heading with this, especially the possibility of where Pinmei will end up.

Anyway, though I am no English major/specialist; I found your chapters very well-written, descriptive, and they had a very smooth flowing feel to them. Hope to see more soon. :-)
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