Reviews for A Half Second Dream
yukitenshixxx chapter 8 . 10/31/2011
I just read this story as a recomandation from akai tenshi since she said it's one of her favorites. And I totally have to agree with her. this story is just great. your writing style is beautiful and I just love your story line. I cried when Yumiko told Fuji's past (I'm way too emotional by the way :p) I hope you will continue to write this story. Because I really want to know what has happened that Yumiko doens't know and how it will end. I'm really curious. please continue your story I'm sure there are a lot of people who are waiting for the next chapters as well.

ja ne, again great work
LostInMind93 chapter 8 . 2/7/2010
Pleas update i relly want to know more whit wat wil happen to Fuji and the rest of the people in the story!

I am a bit angry that you dont have updatet for a long time and i sure that many people want to know whats gonna happen next and so wil i so pleas update. :)
SilverCyanide chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
I read this forever ago but... every time I think of Fuji's birthday, I think of this fic and the "half second birthday" thing. Funny how some things stick. :)

~KA
KuroNite chapter 8 . 2/18/2009
incredible.. i'm at loss to what i should say
KuroNite chapter 5 . 2/18/2009
i used to watch TV champion too! but they replaced it with another show (i only have one channel) i like the 3minute desserts one (though the ones where kids compete, like the one with geography of japan and characters are insane)

bleh

sry i blabbled

I like the story
twentyonenine chapter 7 . 1/5/2009
i was just reading this story again,

by any miracle i hope u do continue this story because it is really fantastic! work of a tensai here.

love fuji and saeki to death
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 8 . 11/7/2008
This story is absolutely amazing! There's so much depth and description. Please continue this magnificent piece of writing. It is definately one of the best stories that I have ever read.
misamiera chapter 8 . 10/23/2008
Wah! So sad! ;_; Anyway, keep up the great work!

I always love these types of angsty stories of my favorite characters. Like another author said, it's not because I'm sadistic; it's because I think that a person somtimes becomes better through suffering. I think this is a great story...

Please continue! :)
NewSlove chapter 8 . 8/29/2008
no matter how many times i read this, i still like it (: i still continue and will continue to wait for you to update this story (:
Elysis chapter 8 . 5/29/2008
Sob...poor Fuji, I feel so sad for him. I hope Fuji will appreciate his friends' help very soon since their intention was only to make him happy, that's really sweet of them.

Will you keep update it? I hope you will...

please update!
hermion8 chapter 8 . 5/1/2008
this story is very good...i like how you made fuji, actually..._ he's super good, and i do think of him like that..._ i wish i had photographic memory...:P

i really like the plot and everything...i was touched...:P i would suggest a beta, though...:P no offense
001Kamikakushi chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
oh yeah and uhm. yeah I also think that perhaps you went a bit too far about Fuji's tensainess. It's not realistic anymore ... :(

But still like it :P
Kami-san chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
really original storyline you have here! Friendship is so beautiful! I really love how you manage to keep every character IC. And how you wrtie it, it makes us want to know badly what happens next.
Kami-san chapter 8 . 11/22/2007
OMG! I've nerver thought I would cry so badly reading your story!

Please update soon!

Wouah that is the most heartbreaking sentences of all:

" It sems like he felt guilty for being happy. He was punishing himself for Katsuhiko’s death. So he couldn’t accept that he could be happy after Katsuhiko’s death. The stress became heavier, especially around Katsuhiko’s birthday and his death. He would skip from school when he couldn’t be able put his smiling mask."

It is really good how you make connection with the actual manga, your story fit perfectly and explain so many behavior of Fuji.

Plus, it's not OCC! and it so rare to read some good fic about fuji that are not yaoi. Good thing you stuck with frienship.

Update!

Well, you should really get a beta reader, you fic is so good that I'm sure there are many volunteers right there! The storyline is extremely well written but the grammar...It seems to me it gets worst through the chapters

Update! please!
ritsuka.soubi chapter 8 . 8/4/2007
aw, poor fuji

your story is amazing, i hope your going to update soon
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