Reviews for The Warehouse Perp
surf1027 chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
even though you left it at a bad point it was still a good chapter. the story just keeps getting better and better
jcn2416 chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
china wont be far enough if you dont update soon...jk...i cant wait for more...elliot brusts in and stops them...right?

nikki
Carm.Ella.James chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
good but mean cliffhanger
beckahmarie2 chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
Ohh man. Intense is definatly your thing! I cannot WAIT to read the next chapter! D

~Beckah
gentle-haikus chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
Excellent chapter! Well-written and just fantastic. I really enjoy reading this story because it is so suspenseful and this chapter is a great example. It was good when you went into a flashback to why Olivia hates clowns so much. And it's just evil how Jack and Shaw would put her in a room full of clowns. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible.
xfreelifex chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
Oh yeah, you better! Great chapter. That thing with the teddy bear is creepy...lol at first I wondered what Casey was doing. Oh, two things/questions. First, can you really identify a person's blood by the color (and adding onto that when has Fin ever seen Liv's blood?) Second, the flashback with Serena seems a bit ooc for Olivia's mother who was supposedly a drunked raving lunatic. I don't mind the ooc cuz it's a cute scene, but just so's you know. UPDATE SOON! (And don't move to China!)
Kelly of the midnight dawn chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
ARG! 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I think you got my point LOL!

Update soon,

-Kelly

PS Great job explaining why Olivia is afraid of clowns but still EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL EVIL, EVIL, EVIL ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
RoninSenshi chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
That would be the place to go. It's so crowded over there. Ick. But the Forbidden Palace was awesome, I highly recommend it. You're a quick updater, I've no doubt we'll be seeing another chapter soon.
Caia chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
I wouldn't bite your head off, that would mean no update! :P

I really liked this chapter...
onetreefan chapter 9 . 3/15/2006
great great chapter! I can't believe you are leaving me hanging there, but i'll try and be patient while I wait for your newest chapter. great writing and good luck with the updates.
Saint New chapter 8 . 3/15/2006
Whoa...whoa...okay, i was wondering how everybody thinks that these guys can get Olivia out of her apartment without neighbors noticing...I glad that you put this in here, makes it seems more realistic...good job and update soon please and thank you
thebookwormxo chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
I don't think Elliot and Olivia should be together but that's just my opinion. Plz remember to read my fics!

Love Always,

Jared Padalecki's Girl
xfreelifex chapter 8 . 3/14/2006
OMGOMGOMGOMG Wow, great last two chapters! Poor Liv...Carter is an absolute jerk! I know everyone's saying update, but please do it (as I know you are lol)
CynthiaB chapter 8 . 3/14/2006
Good chapter! I had a little of everything: friendship, love, action...

Keep it up!
blindingdarkness15 chapter 8 . 3/14/2006
i'm waiting...
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