Reviews for A Utopian Chronicle
SomeoneSomewhere chapter 15 . 6/8/2013
Sasuke-sama is the sexiest person on the planet, and Sakura is a GODDESSS! Lol, Lee is correct on that one. I think Ino should end up with Naruto though. The fight scenes are very good, Sakura is so smart I love it. I also kept thinking Ino would get her same crush on Sasuke but I guess she's preoccupied crushing over Sakura-chan LIKE EVERYONE IN THE WORLD
aimiera chapter 15 . 2/1/2010
ne this story is really good. and i like the fanart you made for this story. they are really lovely and cool. continue, please
NixRegina chapter 15 . 11/29/2009
keep writing. It'sreally good.
Shadow of the Abyss chapter 9 . 7/19/2008
what do you mean by when a city insignia is destroyed it has fallen from it's conqueror what if it hasn't been conquered?
h3rshy675 chapter 15 . 6/28/2008
i love it! i really like the love triangle... though its not much of a love triangle seeing as Sasuke is gonna be with Sakura and more than likely Naruto is gonna be with Hinata... but i love it all the same!

plz update as soon as you can!

-h3rshy
AGENT KELL chapter 15 . 4/8/2008
This has been my first time reading this story, and frankly, i am really really impressed by it. It is really amazing!

I love the way you write, for one, and i like the terms and all because it is fantasy, and who doesn't have fantasies? But it's really lovely, because I though that Sakura fit into her role perfectly. [: This is just so fantastic.

And then again, I think this story hasn't gotten to the eyes of many others, whom I think would appreciate this story as well! I mean, the chapters are so entertaining and packed with loads of action, plus I think the plot is really quite amazing, and these Gems never fail to impress me. The characters are pretty cute too, xD. The chapters are long and nice and snuggly.

and then again i wish I could write as well as you.

I'll be adding this story into a C2 which I just joined, because it has hints of SasuSaku in it. xD Really, it's just amazing, so don't ever give up on it. I'm sure there are many others who would agree with me.

[: Please update soon!

Ja!

IC-chan
aridarling chapter 15 . 4/7/2008
KYA! I also love this one! Haha, now I really want to play Ragnarok! Pero kailangan mag-bayad.. T_T so summer na lang! Anyways, please update soon! xDD
PLEASE DELETE THIS ACCOUNT FFN chapter 15 . 1/22/2008
wow! please update soon!
The Sociopathism of Trees chapter 15 . 1/12/2008
way to go! keep the chapters coming!
CrAzY-SiLLy-Me chapter 15 . 1/9/2008
LOL. Interesting battle they had, I can imagine the whole thing! Great job ne-chan! Still though, I'm not sure if the man they're fighting is who I think he is.
AGENT Kuma-chan chapter 15 . 1/8/2008
*review as reading*

'That' group...I wonder what their name is...

Tobi really is a good boy.

(though, his karma must be bad for he keeps getting attacked by his own teammates. Maybe ino and dei-chan will tag-team attack him one day)

NOO! RACOON-CHAN! DON'T GET HURT!

...phew...sasu-chan saved racoon-chan...good work, lad!

sasuke, you should now better than to get yourself stuck in a corner!

...you had better not think about letting lee be the sacrifice, (no matter how much you want to get rid of another one of sakura's suitors)

Naruto, you're trusting agate then. And now we finally meet one of the men that agate is trying to kill...except we don't see him or find out his name...

NOO! RACOON-CHAN IS GETTING HURT AGAIN! Naruto, don't use up too much energy healing him...

and now the agate trio prepare to fight...

IT MUST BE HIDAN! only HE talks like THAT!

they attacked him so well...and he didn't get hurt...

IT'S HIDAN!

...INO! YOU DID SO WELL, WHY MUST YOU FREEZE UP NOW? RUN OR ELSE YOU WILL DIE! AND THEN, IF YOU DO SURVIVE, YOU WON'T GO ON ANY MORE MISSIONS!

Sasuke, must you always save someone at last minute? trying to give them a heart-attack or something?

...

That must hurt, getting thrown aside...

SAKURA! you're amazing (a genius! a prodigy! smarter than shi-chan! ...that might be too far...shikamaru is a genius without working...but still!) freezing the feet like that...Sakura should be a detective...

...and that was fast sasuke.

...More proof of sakura's genius! (it's almost like it was planned out.

...it wasn't...no, I shall ignore any facts that it was)

And now the evil-man-that-shall-be-thought-of-as-Hidan-no-matter-what has been freezed by ice! TAKE THAT TOBI! Even the 'kids' can kill/hurt/defeat-a-fake-body of THAT man!

silk black robes...makes me think of itachi...

Sakura, able to replace sasuke at the right moment with your Mirage...that was quick reflexes and thinking...

And then noticing that the body was fake (GREAT WORK!). You should be the leader, sakura!

...lee, I feel sorry for agate's trio. let them go.

...

How does sakura now what the empress will do? does she know something that we don't? ...connections with important people, eh?

You're welcome! (why are you thanking us? you are the one treating us!)
666Shukakugrl28 chapter 15 . 1/8/2008
this story is so awesome! i hope u update really soon! will there be sasukexsakura fluff in the next chapter? pweaty pwease! :)
The Sociopathism of Trees chapter 14 . 12/30/2007
i love this fic and i love the art that goes with it but now i really want to know what is up with that one pic of sakura with the black sphere and yellow eyes.
Anime Girl chapter 14 . 12/29/2007
I think this story is very update as soon as you can.
666Shukakugrl28 chapter 14 . 12/28/2007
i have read this story from the very beginning, and i must say that it is SUPERB! i really want u to update soon after my review cause i am starting to twitch from no updates from my favorite stories. *sigh* pwety pweease! *gives puppy dog pout*
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