|Reviews for Falling|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
I'd create an ice breathing, ice powered princess who impersonates an ordinary, normal human being, befriends Cree and Abby, until she freely shows Cree and Abby and their friends, schoolmates, classmates, teammates her ice powers at last in order to easily shock them if only I own KND.
| Cree and Abby chapter 1 . 4/12
Celestia: Fate has been cruel and order unkind
How can I have sent you away?
The blame was my own; the punishment, yours
The harmony's silent today
But into the stillness I'll bring you a song
And I will your company keep
Till your tired eyes and my lullabies
Have carried you softly to sleep
Once did a pony who shone like the sun
Look out on her kingdom and sigh
She smiled and said. "Surely, there is no pony
So lovely and so well beloved as I"
So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights passed
Soon did that pony take notice that others
Did not give her sister her due
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew
But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly
Takes hold of the mind of its host
And that foolish pony did nothing to stop
The destruction of one who had needed her most
For the whole entire time, Cree and Abby hated to see what happened to Princess Luna of the moon.
Lullay moon princess, goodnight sister mine
And rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth
Through cloud, and through sky, and through space
Carry the peace and the coolness of night
And carry my sorrow in kind
Luna, you're loved so much more than you know
May troubles be far from your mind
And forgive me for being so blind
Cree and Abby felt nothing at all but worse for Princess Celestia of Equestria having no other choice but to exile her own sister, Luna to the moon.
The years now before us
Fearful and unknown
I never imagined
I'd face them on my own
May these thousand winters
Swiftly pass, I pray
I love you; I miss you
All these miles away
May all your dreams be sweet tonight
Safe upon your bed of moonlight
And know not of sadness, pain, or care
And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there
| Someone chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
*throws flame at Father* HA! TAKE THAT, YA FREAK!
Heheheh...anyway, great story! Cree makes a good wingman...err...wingsister? Meh.
| Tofudash239 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Man that was a good trip for Abby haha get it trip because she...oh I'm more bad at jokes than Hoagie and Cree put together anyway cute story keep it up ;)
| LovelyToMeetYou chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
This was a lovely story! Just one thing: it should be "your foot" in the first line, but other than that, all seems fine! Great job!
| Pandamunk chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
If I had any flames for this, then you would have to put a huge sticker labeling me a hypocrite
I loved this, it was soo cute. Esspecially the bop of the magazine to the head. (Waves 2/5 flag also) love 'em!
| Numbuh 55 chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Woah, this was a really good fanfic!
Cree's actually helping Abby as a sister, yet, kinda keeping her older sister hate intact. Nice job.
| LittleBlue33 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
great cute oneshot
| Leper Gnome chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Omg. *glomps you* Luff it, luff it! *death hug Abbeh and Hoageh*
| Luna Rapunzel chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
YAY WICKED ONE-SHOTS!
| Gemmz chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
That... was... AWESOME! Now this is just the kind of romance I like. Kind of awkward, not too mushy, and funny. And extra points for the couple being 2/5 (w00t)! This has earned a place on my favourites list, totally.
| Evilevergreen chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
This was so cute. I really liked it. I even laughed at end. I was sure Hoagie was going to go, "Good one, Cree." While Abby just groaned, now having to deal with two people and bad puns.
| Rhylin Sweet chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
lol/ Yay! so kyute ands funny! I'm really starting to like ur style! -
| NumbuhInfinity chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
That was cute. I think Abby's gonna kill Cree when she realizes what she did.
| KellyClarkstonGirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
DUDE! I SO love you right now! Me 'n' my friends at the 2/5 forum have been sad because there were no DECENT 2/5 fanfics around, and then YOU started! You are now my hero! (*waves 2/5 fan*)