Reviews for Your lips are Mine
Sora4D chapter 1 . 2/1
Great story ! I really enjoyed it! Especially the fights between Itachi and Voreka.
DreamingTheMelody chapter 33 . 10/5/2015
I really don't know how I feel about this, at the end. I adore Itachi, so so so much. He has been probably one of my most favorite characters in the Naruto manga.
Yet he is so troubled, so aloof and so so very hard to understand. It seems like everything and anything to do with him would automatically have to be such upheaval. He is amazing and beautiful and lovely, yet if I am honest with myself, it is so hard to imagine him in any romantic capacity. So I totally understand you writing this the way you did. And the ending of the story itself is a bit... hopeful, if nothing else.
But the obsessed little part of my heart can't help but wish you had written it differently, as completely... (almost realistic) as this was.
Thank you for the lovely read, the lovely journey, the laughs and frustrations that all come with an amazing story!
Natsuki Scarlet chapter 33 . 9/28/2015
Hi! I just wanted to say that I think that this story you made is quite wonderful! :D My only problem is that sometimes I get confused in some chapters. I am really confused about Voreka's clan stuff. :( And sometimes Itachi's personality gets a little bit confusing as well as Voreka's. Maybe you clarify that to me. And also the ending is really CONFUSING... :d I don't get why Itachi didn't died. And what happened to Kisame? Besides all of that, the plot is really interesting! I WOULD really be happy if you make a sequel! :D Pretty please? With cherry on top? XD
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED ITACHIXOC! Do u know any good fanfics with that pairing? ;)
xKaminix chapter 12 . 10/26/2014
I love you story. I also like how the chapter titles make up a poem :)
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 33 . 5/31/2014
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 27 . 5/31/2014 she an idiot? Itachi had made it clear enough even a dimwit like ME was able to figure out what he meant...
Kashlazy chapter 33 . 5/7/2014
I absolutely loved this story. Although I felt that Itachi's intentions for like the first 20 chapters didn't make any sense to me, it makes sense that she was oblivious. The part where Kisame started to dislike her after she came back didn't make any sense. I wish you gave more insight into her past like her past with Haku, her family's treatment of her, how exactly she stumbled in the lost village. I wish you also gave some insights of Itachi's povs. And I'm so so glad you didn't make Deidara sound like an asshole or an violent idiot like some fanfics do
NightRain2DaySnow chapter 33 . 9/26/2013
Haha, loved the ending and the story! A few times, I got a bit lost, but apart from those few times of cluelessness, I really enjoyed reading this! Are you going to make a sequel? I hope you do! I want to see what happens next between Itachi and Voreka! Loved the characters! Please continue
xVentressx chapter 33 . 8/18/2013
This story is perfect:3
The OC is plot is story is very well is so MUCH in character.
It had so much pression in some moments that I had to stop and bite my fist before trying to continue.
I am just...speechless...THANK YOU for writing this wonderful story dear:)
MysteriousDragonPrincess chapter 33 . 5/4/2013
i REALLLLY enjoyed reading your fanfic it twas very interesting and unique. I REALLY hope you do write a sequel cause id like to know what happens next! i hope she ends up with Itachi and i cant wait to find out if she dose! XD
voidaccountdontview chapter 33 . 3/14/2013
Huh. The ending seemed weird to me. But nevertheless, I loved the story. Your writing is amazing!
Imaginneeee chapter 33 . 3/11/2013
Somewhat disturbing... But it gives me feels at te same time... Them feels...
CrazyPseudonym chapter 33 . 2/15/2013
I love you! So much! Your awesomeness knows no bounds! Ahaha, you did a really, really awesome job with this story, Author-san. I am completely amazed...awed...and in love with this. I hope to read more from you. I also hope to learn from you, if you don't mind. C:
serp-derp chapter 33 . 10/16/2012
hur hur hur, author-san, I will be expecting a sequel.
End of story.
serp-derp chapter 28 . 10/16/2012
:O Author-san! I adore this book! I really do ;) And I love the depth of your characters, oh and your chapter titles.
Is it meant to be a poem of some sort? Because it's very clever!
You really should write more OcX-blah- stories x3 Or finished Till You Die
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