Reviews for The Substitute
MLygia chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
What a delicious history! In spite of the great sense of humour that permeates the whole narrative, more complex themes as the way as Alex tries to reconcile conflicting feelings as the jealousy, possession, and the insecurity are very evident. Heph too. In spite of his love for Ale he doesn't stop having sexual needs that cannot be pleased. The final paragraph is perfect. It gets to translate the whole game of emotions that is present in your fic. Thanks for writing.
Queendel chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I like this fic. It was funny but also had elements of romance and caring. It was also interesting to see how Alexander laid his insecurities before Heph, and how he wanted to please his lover with such an unselfish action, despite the pain to him.

I like Hylas...he resembled Alexander not only in his physical looks but it appears also in his emotional vulnerability.

The sex was hott.

Looking forward to more soon.
purple lolly chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
i loved the first chapter i found it well funny. umm after that there were some really funny bits i could just image everyone lining up outside Hephaistion's room Take a ticket and join the back of the que.

But an excellent story :)
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