I don't know if you read reviews still, but this is beautifully written. I actually heard Holden's voice while reading it! A bit overlaid by Draco but definitely got what you were going for.

I liked how you did this story from Draco's point of view. It is sad how Ron is dead and Draco's mom and his friends are dead too. Pansy, Blaise and Goyle will be at Hogwarts forever. It sounds like Draco will have a new start in life with Hermione.

well written. For my taste, there wasn't enough dialogue, so I kinda got got bored with the first part, but that's just me. But it picked up at the end. And I definitely liked the ending.

You write beautifully. Thank you for a wonderful piece. I love how you tinkered with the emotions. They’re not even OOC. Beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you.

So I'm your talent's admirer now, it's official. Made for a really sad realistic story that somehow was full of hope and redemption. Thank you.

I guess I liked it? I am not however a fan of endless internal dialogue.

So sad but then a glimpse of hope. Wonderful stuff.

Great - really. Probably the best picture ever of inside Draco after the war. That terrible feeling of his mother fading away until it makes no difference that she (or her body) is killed - and his friends dying around him - and he is just left there alone like an empty shell, not able to feel anything anymore. And then this, because they've got nothing to lose. And, consequently, have everything to win. That way this gloomy little text turns into a wonderful life-affirming and optimistic message: Life always wins! She knew that. And now he knows too. Great - really.

Thanks.
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That was amazing! Very well written, intense, and satisfying. Please change the rating to M for the undressing, though.

Really good one. Had me moved to tears. Very realistic. Liked it.

It is nice. Something new:)

Wow. That's all I have to say. This is excellent, and I'm so glad you wrote it. Thank you!

totally saw Catcher in the Rye in this without reading the A/N! what with the sentence structure, and the 'phonies' and all. great attempt with it xD *claps* language isn't that most accurate from what I remember of it (studied it half a year ago, can't remember the details anymore), but it sounds pretty damn convincing :)
... and I suppose I should really read A/Ns at the start of the fics - got very lost at the first few paras woooops haha lesson learnt

This is beautiful. It almost made me cry.