Reviews for Heavily Broken
Mana Shay chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
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CrazyHorseNinja chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
I thought this was a good story.
D chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
wow, it was pretty good!

no one writes an actual 'romance' part...so if u get the time, please write one! i beg of you!

for some reason i totally support this couple, LOL

i loved this, and i loved the last line! reat job!
BelleDayNight chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Good job. I like the relationship between Mana and Pharaoh Atem. It's hard to say if its romantic or pure friendship...perhaps a little of both? They look very cute together regardless!
KedakaiOkami chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Aw! That's so sweet! I just decided I wanted to read a story about Atem and Mana and here one is! _ I think it's great!
Zombyra chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
this was a good atempt i like it so it is joining my favourite stories and you are now i my list of fav authors.
blueangel11isdead chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
aw... this is so cute :)

LET HIM TRY MANA :D:D:D:D
Harpygirl91 chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
oh. I like
Celestialfae chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
Finally a non shounen-ai story. I love these types of moments they make me cry.
Rutoh-Chan chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
Love it. Where do these ideas come from!