|Reviews for Harry Potter: The Revision of Fate|
| Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
great story. keep it up
| greenfly chapter 2 . 5/15/2008
Bloody Brilliant! (In the words of Ron...) Can't wait to read more! Update?
| greenfly chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
| hA-UkA chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
I have to admit, I'm definitely curious where this story is going to end up now.
| WAYNE chapter 2 . 11/23/2007
I'VE READ IT AGAIN. COME ON, HOW ABOUT ANOTHER CHAPTER OR TWENTY.
| FrequencyQueen chapter 2 . 11/12/2007
Great plan. Now I'll wait to see what goes wrong with it!
| FrequencyQueen chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
Interesting start to this story. There's an awful lot of things you hint about, so I can't wait to see what actually happened before this.
| power214063 chapter 2 . 9/22/2007
please update this story
| GinnyLover14 chapter 2 . 8/3/2007
Very nice story too!
Hope you update this one soon!
| Enyaw Yepse chapter 2 . 7/18/2007
Very interesting, but ...
Ask an older person about Artie Shaw. He He
| Aqua Mage chapter 2 . 12/23/2006
Interesting idea. I'd like to see more...
| Nicol chapter 2 . 6/21/2006
This is an interesting turn.
I am enjoing reading this and hope to see more in the future.
| Persephone of Peridot chapter 2 . 5/15/2006
this is a really good premise and i want to know what happens so please update!
| lmill123 chapter 2 . 4/8/2006
I like your story so far and I am looking forward to your next updates. Out of all the girls, Ginny is the only one I can't see being abused, but if she is then it is mainly at the hands of Molly as she feels that she has the right to rule over everyone in her house on everything, including deciding who her children will marry, if she allows them to marry. I am looking forward to when the ministry and Dumbledork discover that these children have been adopted by a Goblin and are no longer under their control. It also sounds like Lily realized that Dumbledore wasn't the sweet, kind old man that he leads everyone to believe and did all this even behind the back of James, as if she knew that James was too much under the spell of Dumbledore and would never believe that the old man would do anything evil. You get the impression that in some ways Lily lumped Voldermolt, Dumbledore and the ministry under the heading evil and not to be trusted.
| jfjgnf chapter 2 . 4/6/2006
like the story as of yet please continue