Reviews for Bottom of the Abyss
friend chapter 1 . 6/29
Great fanfiction. The writers of Stargate SG1 should have done a better job of ending the Abyss episode. This ending was much better than theirs!
friend chapter 1 . 6/27
Great Fan Fiction episode. Loved it. Good work. Thanks.
Goomba chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
I don't really enjoy stories where Sam is too pathetic and lovey... and I'm sorry to say this falls into that type of story. It's well written enough and I very much liked that Jack made it to just outside the control room before he let himself 'lean' against a wall and let Sam help him - that was very nice and well written (and very cute.) It's just when it starts to get mushy you loose my interest (too redundant, too un-original, too weak and pathetic.) So keep writting and you'll keep getting better.

Cheers Jen
VampirateLycan chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Love Jacks last line. 'Its SO coming out of the room' ;D
Natters chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
very good. i love the "It’s SO coming out of the room!” line
janissima chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
It was very sweet and nicely done. Thanks for sharing your work!
SG-Fan chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
Good job!
lia-finn chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
This one was REALLY good! Thanks for sharing it. -Lia