|Reviews for Once Upon a Time!|
| the-daughter-of-poseidon312 chapter 16 . 3/21
OMG SO CUTE!
| hi chapter 22 . 3/19
OH MY FUCKING GOSH OF COURSE I WANT A SEQUEL YEAAAAAAASSSS
| elixxxrAngel chapter 22 . 10/3/2013
| magisterquinn chapter 1 . 5/17/2012
I'm sorry. I haven't read the rest of the story but I _had_ to tell you to please take it easy on the commas. It's probably just me, I find grammar and sentence structure very distracting.
But on that note, I'm still reading and looking forward to the rest! :)
| lololoslytherin chapter 22 . 9/1/2006
i would love to add a sequel this story is awesome maybe get raven pregnat the first or second chapter and like show how hard it was to have a baby[in the sequel]this story was absoulutly perfect!
| ravanwolf chapter 9 . 7/5/2006
Just saying, but the lawyer's name reminds me of a bird. A foreign bird. Probably a canary. Latin canary, that works _. Sorry, just had to say that.
| Forlong chapter 10 . 6/23/2006
How do you burn noodles? That doesn't even seem possible.
| Forlong chapter 8 . 6/23/2006
Aw. That was so sweet.
| Forlong chapter 3 . 6/23/2006
| Forlong chapter 2 . 6/23/2006
Now it's starting to get interesting.
| Forlong chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
I'll read more to see where you're going with this.
| bluerose2823 chapter 22 . 6/20/2006
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!
| erika chapter 22 . 6/18/2006
keep it up and a squel would be awesome. peace.
| K-promises-fall chapter 22 . 6/18/2006
What do you mean IF i want a sequel. Of course I want a sequel. I want to see how nervous Raven would be on her Wedding night and day. Please grant my wish. Please, please please. I really liked the story.
| kool-shoes chapter 22 . 6/17/2006
that was awesome! please write a sequel! i would love it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! write a sequel!cuz if this story was this good so will the sequel