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![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() i like it it is very good. I like how he justy said I QUIT! :) |
![]() ![]() Just wanted to point out an error you made: Seto didn't make the lockets, Mokuba did. Mokuba made them while Seto was in his coma. I think that's shown in Volume... 12? Yeah, when Pegasus is telling Seto to duel Yuugi again, Mokuba's in the dungeon thinking about the lockets. It's the first time we ever see Seto wearing his (I think). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that's SO sweet! I guess each others all they have and they have to cling to it...I also like the Rent song. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful Fanfic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked that. So cute. *gushes* And the Rent lyrics. Oh, the Rent lyrics. *gushes some more* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... This is a very sweet story. I like how the story shows he can put Mokuba first for once. Nicely written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute! I always knew Seto had a soft spot for Mokuba. Story was pretty great and I hope you write more! Hope you get more inspiration from it! Oh ya, lol, you weren't imagining things. I knew you probably was thinking about it, lol. Thanx for the reviews too! ~Divine Crimson Rose~ |
![]() ![]() yay! I like this one! _ poor mokie... he misses his nii-sama... write more! |
![]() ![]() BRAVO! *applauds* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw o lol so adorable D |
![]() ![]() ![]() kawai that was really good i really liked it and the poem that went with it _ kep writing sque e e |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really sweet. I loved how the song fit in, and it's nice to see Seto choose Mokuba over even Kaiba Corp. Also, I'm not sure if you already know about this, but you might get more feedback if you allow anonymous reviews. The default on the site is to only accept signed reviews. To change this, you would need to log in and go to the reviews section. From there, click on anonymous and then press enable. The page should say it was successful. Hope this helps. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a VERY well written story, I'd say. It's also really sweet. I don't know any other word to describe. Except for...absolute awesomeness! XP Anyway, I hope you write more things like this. ~Ja!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good concept, i mean i love rent and these are my fav characters so i really enjoyed your story. Good job! |