|Reviews for My Lives, My Deaths|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Oh, this is beautiful. It is bittersweet. Really beautiful
| Prl16 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Aw, the tree. Beautiful.
| dragonbabezee chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
A fan fic has never made me cry before. At work no less. Teach me to be reading instead of working.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
That was really really goodand sweet and keep it up because your good at doing this
| flowerslut chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Truly beautiful! This story brought both a tear to my eye as well as a smile.
| TheRammbler chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I have only one word for this, however cheesy it may be.
| Ron'sBella chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
:'(. How could I have not yet read this story yet? I love all of your work and this was no different. Fantastic. Thank you so much for writing it, very peaceful and lovely. RB
| Quentin B. Caulfield chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Heartrendingly sweet. So so sweet. Loved every word of it.
| Shlayne chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
omg i loved it!
| Princess of Despair chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Oh wow. This made me cry and it is definitely not easy to make me cry. The emotion in this was perfect. You are amazing.
| JenniferWL chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Absolutely brillants and it brought tears to my eyes. I am so glad to know that you still continue to write. Talent such as yours should always continue to be seen and heard and read. Thank you!
| Meow227 chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
i dont know whether i am making any mistakes in typing this review - i can hardly see through my tears.
i myself could not have chosen a better portrait of Vegetas p.o.v for all he endured and felt with respect to Bulma.
all the while we find a crowd of other characters, dominant actions, or at least preparations, but this, this is...
| Obelisk of Light chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Wow ... this is very beautiful! You've managed to portray Vegeta's emotional side without making him excessively so. The way Vegeta's lives pass before his eyes before his final death is excellently done; It never occured to me that Vegeta was dying until I came to the part where he looked upon Bulma's tomb.
You have one small mistake at the very beginning ...
Not honor, not principal, not even righteousness.
"Principal" should be "principle", you've got confused between two homonyms.
You might also want to add a page break where you change tenses and cut back to the present.
| chibitrunk chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
I normally don't read first person fic, but this fic is very well done. I really like your portrayal of Vegeta, calm, wise and it feels like he has been through a lot. Bravo!
| Yukishirou Setsuna chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
Nice, really nice. You must know a lot about the manga.