|Reviews for Senses|
| Ali chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
I love this. I loved her telling Jayne and Mal that "The boy with a girl's name didn't need them anymore" referring to Jaynes porn pictures and not Jayne nor Mal picking up on that meaning and what she was hinting at. :)
| LittleBookOfCalm chapter 4 . 3/8/2006
| lady scribe of avandell chapter 4 . 3/7/2006
I love the simplicity of these vignettes. They're very truthsome and, in a way, very poignant. You've captured the subtle side of the Jayne/River pairing very well. Beautiful.
Sere mi Eru...Lady Scribe of Avandell
| DecentJam chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
Nice work keep it coming, I like the style particularly its very contemporary. Push the boundries with the next bit, keep it real.
| Miss Lucifer chapter 4 . 3/6/2006
oh, so sweet! makes me wanna giggle :) still very short though - you must love leaving us in suspense :)
| angelica chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
| Bookworm.Annie chapter 3 . 3/5/2006
aww cute, update soon
| Miss Lucifer chapter 3 . 3/3/2006
i really like this so far, i think it has a lot of potential. but i think each chapter is way too short. i'm not even asking for plot necessarily maybe just more character study stuff.
there is one thing that i really liked in this chapter, and that's the way you focused on jayne's sense of smell. if you watch him throughout the series he's always smelling things - he's a very physical person, but it rarely pops up in fan fiction. i always wonder why not because it's such an interesting personality trait.
anyway i hope that review helped! i'm waiting for the next chapter, update soon :)