Reviews for To Cross That Line
AngelicAssassin99 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Err... It's a bit confusing cause I've already half forgotten about Tactics... But overall its nice...

I think Haruka's and Kantarou's feelings for each other is very very complicated... But I'm a big fan and supporter if they hook up with each other...

They're like complete opposites, sun and moon, light and darkness... But somehow, they have a sort of aura around them that makes it complete... .
pretense chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I like it, it’s so simple but sweet at the same time... :)
Elf chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
This is really an excellent piece of writing, and I love the wording you used.

You really should build on this; you have the makings for an interesting fic here.

Please continue.

-Elf
pinksnow chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
nice work!Haruka is nicely potrayed!
The Rabid Toenail chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Aww, this is lovely. And so sweet. The descriptions are vivid and refreshing. Great job.
Tsuzuki Yuki chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
D Nice I like the last sentence!
rinrin-chan4 chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Meow! I think I'm gonna start reading all your fics... This is another short but great one... It's a.. err... thoughtful fic based on Haruka... Alrite... Go2go to ur next fic... hahhaha
LadyYuinaNotSignedIn chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
"I still want to cross that line with you. To you."

Hm, with you... and then suddenly saying "to you". That was the only thing that really irked me, however this was pretty good, even though it was written during your Physics class. You must've been bored, huh?