Reviews for Play Date 3: Surprise Pregnancy
marcusedwards411 chapter 7 . 11/14/2014
great!
marcusedwards411 chapter 6 . 11/14/2014
horny lovers its expected
marcusedwards411 chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
very nice 1000/1000 congrats you are the first writer to get a high score
marcusedwards411 chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
hahahahhahahaha
marcusedwards411 chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
water sex
marcusedwards411 chapter 2 . 11/14/2014
Ron Stoppable you re the father of these twin babies and mmm how bout two sets of twins or triplets would be nice
marcusedwards411 chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
yes i really love this trio
BartWLewis chapter 8 . 4/3/2014
Well this one hase more of a plot, and I like that. Hope you update soon.
Anthony1l chapter 8 . 5/4/2012
This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.
EnterpriseCV-6 chapter 8 . 3/17/2011
hey I gotta tell you this is a great series of stories,two things though the first one isn't I repeat isn't a flame more less a minor spelling error and I quote "the more he licked Kim and the more he licked Kim" just asking but isn't one of them a "she?"

also just asking but when are you going to update this story, Camping fun, and Played like a fool?
shadownartuo666 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
i love the play date fics cant wait for an update good job do you like ron/shego pairs because there are very few godd one maybe you could do one
emilyis chapter 8 . 1/25/2010
okay. so you have a good story, with a great plot. but you may want to check over some parts for grammar, although you have phenomenal spelling. and there is a lot of talking during the sex adn you use "redhead" "brunette" and "blonde" a lot. using their name is just fine. and you can never over use a noun, nouns shouldn't be replaced, like "frozen object" instead of ice cube is a little unnecessary. but these are just minor things that i noticed. overall, great job.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 8 . 7/15/2008
aww, whatup? why didn't you continue this thing? what up wit dat, man? if still possible (some pun intended) update now, or... something.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 4 . 7/15/2008
bwahahahahaha! what did i tell you? yeah, i didn't say for two, but... eh.
Toriano.Flacko chapter 2 . 7/15/2008
first predictable words when he realizes hes gonna have two babies? oh shit. first predictable words when he hears that they checked? oh shit. first words when he hears that Kim's dad knows? can anyone say 'black hole, first class, please?' yeah, I know you already said it, but come on, it was funny..
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