Reviews for White Plum, Reminiscent
persephonesfolly chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
Tomoe's POV was eloquent, as were the parallels between her mistakes and Kenshin's later ones.
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
That's a really bittersweet look at Tomoe's POV, I like it. I especially liked the idea that Akira helped Tomoe to happiness after he died, and now she will do the same for Kenshin. Makes very good sense too, in light of her later role during the Enishi crisis.
Warg chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Very nice work!

Strong and well formed tone.. Developed at a perfect pace..

Tomoe reflecting on her mistake twice over.. aah "too little realization until far too late."

Great ending!.. great read .. thanx
skenshingumi chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
I like the idea of Tomoe realizing she has repeated her earlier mistake in not being vocal about her love. I liked the line, "I won't let him make my mistakes, sorrow holding him from the life within his reach." Actually he spends years having sorrow hold him from life so she doesn't realize what a long path they both have to follow.
Nondescript white van chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
Poor Tomoe. It's always too late for her. :(

I can really feel the depth of her regret in this.
Zelucius chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
I loved it. Period.
sueb262 chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
I really like the idea of Tomo'e reflecting on how her decisions have played out-strong theme here, and nicely developed!
Crazy Hyper Lady chapter 1 . 3/3/2006
cute and sweet! totaly realistic! I love it!