Awesome fic!

The storyline is very wellthought, and your writing is great. You're good at changing between dialogue and thoughts, between Draco and Hermione's point of view.

Hermione is very in-character. Draco, of course, isn't seeing as his changing to a completely other person. What is great about that, is that you explain. We don't just see a good Draco instead of evil. We see a complicated Draco, trying to be nice, and we understand how he has to struggle to get rid of his fathers influence.

I thought it was kind of weird, when I realised that Hermione wasn't going with Harry and Ron, I always imagine Ginny going with the trio, but of course, this fic had to take place at Hogwarts.

I didn't like hermione sneering at Draco in the first chapters. She has her right to be suspicious, but he was being polite to her! And the fact that he doesn't get angry because of it, also made me think 'huh'? A bit to smooth, if you understand.

The writing-thing is great, and I think the poems you let them write were beautiful!

Think I'll stop here, promised you a long review, and I think I've fullfilled that promise :D

/Marie (TheBoltShapedScar)

This was definitely one of the best chapters yet, which is strange, seeing as my work is usually better, the shorter it takes me to write it!

What Neville said in the DADA-lesson was very touching, and I'm glad you write everyday-situations too! :D I promise you a long and detailed review, when I've read the last chapter, okay? (Or the last of the ones you have already written. Is there going to be more chapters or is the fic finished?)

I think this is a great idea! Especially the heads sharing dorm... Nicely written...

Great story! XSorry, short review, but i have to hurry!

yay, a posty post. :D

it was awesome. really good. by readin it, i can tell it must have been hard to write but u did a very good job.

PAMS

Roshni

good chapter, even though you say it's short it's still good!

Natural-181

Awh~ LOVE IT! PLZ UPDATE SOON!

hey

just read chapters 6 and 7. they were amazing. u show a great connection between the too. it is really very good.

PAMS

Roshni

Hey, don't worry about that! You can take your time to solve the problems at school and then work at the story.

I totally understand you. I'm in the 8th grade and I have a lot of school work to do and very little free time. Too bad that writing fanfiction isn't a school subject. It would've been really cool if it was, but I guess that it's too good to be truth.

Any way I hope that school doesn't "torture" you too much coz it would be too bad you gave up a story so good just for that.

If you ask me, this chapter was really good. I loved Draco's and Hermione's conversations. They were very cute. They act like friends (well, almost) and they both care. That's so sweet!

But skipping the romantic aspect, this could be really dangerous for both of them. Like Draco said "this small act would not go unnoticed". I'm sure Lucious has his ways to find out what his son's doing and when he'll find out about what happens betwen Draco and Hermione he'll go insane. I'm sure he could find a way to get out of Azkaban for enough time to go to Hogwarts, give Draco a painful lesson about what happens when someone doesn't listen to him and kill Hermione for getting too close to his son. Now that would be interesting.

hey, that's okay. skool's more important especially when you are almost done with it. hope u are able to post soon tho. PAMS

Roshni

o.o school is evil..XD

Great story! Chapter! Thing!

"So what do you guys think, did I do good?"

You are doing good, carry on writing in the same way:), building suspense "Then, lying in bed in his dark room, he realised that the second voice was growing louder and louder in his mind.":)