|Reviews for Open Up Your Eyes|
| Celestia Luna chapter 1 . 1/12
Fate has been cruel and order unkind
How can I have sent you away?
The blame was my own; the punishment, yours
The harmony's silent today
But into the stillness I'll bring you a song
And I will your company keep
Till your tired eyes and my lullabies
Have carried you softly to sleep
Once did a pony who shone like the sun
Look out on her kingdom and sigh
She smiled and said. "Surely, there is no pony
So lovely and so well beloved as I"
So great was her reign and so brilliant her glory
That long was the shadow she cast
Which fell dark upon the young sister she loved
And grew only darker as days and nights passed
Soon did that pony take notice that others
Did not give her sister her due
And neither had she loved her as she deserved
She watched as her sister's unhappiness grew
But such is the way of the limelight, it sweetly
Takes hold of the mind of its host
And that foolish pony did nothing to stop
The destruction of one who had needed her most
Lullay moon princess, goodnight sister mine
And rest now in moonlight's embrace
Bear up my lullaby, winds of the earth
Through cloud, and through sky, and through space
Carry the peace and the coolness of night
And carry my sorrow in kind
Luna, you're loved so much more than you know
May troubles be far from your mind
And forgive me for being so blind
The years now before us
Fearful and unknown
I never imagined
I'd face them on my own
May these thousand winters
Swiftly pass, I pray
I love you; I miss you
All these miles away
May all your dreams be sweet tonight
Safe upon your bed of moonlight
And know not of sadness, pain, or care
And when I dream, I'll fly away and meet you there
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
I loved this! Write another please!
| Vytina chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I just have to say this:
That ending was too cute for words. The slight whack upside the head was very fitting and very touching. :) I love this story, and I do hope you do a chapter story for this relationship. It needs more love!
| Miss Effie T chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
loved it! very good!
| blackrider11 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
As much as I would enjoy it if you DID make it a chapter story... it's been about 4 years since the original post. It's a great one-shot none-the-less and I enjoy reading it every time. (6th time I think? more?) Going to read your other stories now.
| Numbuh 55 chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
Aw! This is such a nice story!
| Shimo Ino chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
| bizarro4 chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
it's great seeing a Cree and Abby interaction fic where they aren't fighting, and where Cree is actually being a loving sister. i agree that Cree defintely has a soft spot for her little sister, i think SPACE, MAURICE, and even VIRUS have clear proof of it.
Chad's such a jerk in this, and therefore true to canon. ;P
great job on this fic!
| Nonamenonamenonameplease chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Neither sisters nor brothers can hate each other all the time, I too know from experience. I also believe (no doubt like many more people) that the duo really care about each other and may very well eventually permanently restore their lost allegiance. Nice job, RadiantBeam.
| dragen95 chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
that'll be sweet anyway i cant beleave people think...were was i going with this...i dont no anyway... good strick that great story
| Gemmz chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Aw! It was refreshing to read about Abby and Cree's friendly sister relationship for a change, and you wrote it well. I think a chapter story would be cool!
| ryan macdonald chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
I like stories that explore the on and off sisterly relationship between Cree and Abby.
You're right that sibilings can't hate each other all the
Also, I agree with you that Cree still cares about Abby even though they fight each other quite a bit.
I too was touched by Cree and Abby's BRIEF reconciliation in operation:SPACE. In turn, I was a bit upset at Abby for throwing her sister in the trash.
I hope that they permanantly reconcile one day...
| Rhylin Sweet chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
lol. I really liked this. I thought i was gonna cry XD
extra chapter? yay!
| Someone chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
I knew Cree had a good side!
| GoldenFlither chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
what do i think...hm...what do i think...if i answered that, you'd jump, scream, and run away from me.
but to summarize it all: whats a word for really really really good? super. awesome. the best. wonderful. still not good enough to describe how emotional i got while reading this story. so i'll say this:
so, did you jump, scream, and run away?