Reviews for Nightfall
eboaden chapter 14 . 5/21/2009
adore this story! i love ur style of writing, its definitely got elements similar to that of stephanie meyer! cant wait for u to produce more work such as this... and by the way, i'm glad u killed off jacob! although the twilight saga wouldn't work without him, he's so anoying! Props to u black angel. you've got real talent!
Anonymous chapter 6 . 5/16/2009
The only thing wrong with this chapter ios the fact that edward drank human blood. If he did his eyes would be red... not to mention he's a "vegetarian". You should change the line; "In case you hadn't noticed, my glass is filled with human blood." to " In case you have'nt noticed i'm drinking blood." Other Wise i love the story. I want to see whats goind to happen next so i have to end this comment.

enczi578 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
i can honestly say i enjoyed reading your story as much as i enjoyed the original twilight saga. good job:)
Aniveria chapter 14 . 5/15/2009
wow...that was a lot of plot. And very complicated plot. i'm amazed you were able to write this and not get lost! it turned out really amazing!
Amethystars chapter 14 . 5/14/2009
I am amazed and envious of your dedication and talent. Though I disliked some parts of the story (jacob killing himself was awful) overall I loved it. Well-written. I though it was great how you integrated some stuff from new moon but still went with everything you'd established as different. It was a nice blend. One of my favorite parts was the very end, with Lestat calling, It was really funny. Great story, thanks for sticking with it!
twilightlvr12321 chapter 14 . 5/10/2009
dear black angel,

you are a great writer and I love this! its almost as good as stefiny myer her self! write as meny of these as you can there great!
Cati chapter 14 . 5/8/2009
This story was great, it did have a few of those moments where it didn't make sense but otherwise it was very good. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read your next story.
Carlisle060 chapter 14 . 5/4/2009

cannot belive you ended it!

i feel so sad :(

but i enjoyed your story!

Carlisle060 chapter 8 . 5/3/2009

50 pages !

i cant write that much ,

but its incredible!

but i do wish that bella doesnt change so fast and like this ,

i dont know.

but i still like it!
Carlisle060 chapter 5 . 5/3/2009

i love this story so much that im reviewing even though ur probably done the story!



Carlisle060 chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
that is so romantic :)
Carlisle060 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009

so intense and its the 1st chapter!

i love how bella is in a cast ,

the clumsy child she is!
Wittmer chapter 14 . 5/1/2009
Thank you. Thank you so much for writing the best story I have ever read in my 10 years of fanfics. You are an incredible writer and the best I have ever seen. I hope you continue your career in writing these magnificent works of art. It was truly my pleasure and privilege to have read this. Thank you thank you thank you.
Happyhannah chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow - that's all I can say!

I started reading this morning and have just finished now (dinner time) - exactly what I did when reading each of Stephenie Meyer's books!

This fanfic is utterly brilliant in every way. All of the characters have so much depth that I honestly forgot that I was reading something fan-written somewhere around chapter 3. Your writing style is very similar to Stephenie's and you have the characters and dialogue exactly right.

The story itself is intriguing and exciting... I think I'm going to class this as a 5th part of the series, perhaps an alternative to books 2, 3 and 4! I honestly enjoyed your portrayal of the engagement and wedding much more than in the actual books... I always thought that Bella's shying away from marriage was a little *too* extreme! The only thing I was unsure of was Bella's special abilities - they seemed a little over the top.

Overall - excellently written, and telling as good a story as books 2, 3 and 4! You have carried on the relationships of everyone in the story really well... most impressive. Please write more! :-)
Wittmer chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
You are amazing
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