|Reviews for Nightfall|
| Happyhannah chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow - that's all I can say!
I started reading this morning and have just finished now (dinner time) - exactly what I did when reading each of Stephenie Meyer's books!
This fanfic is utterly brilliant in every way. All of the characters have so much depth that I honestly forgot that I was reading something fan-written somewhere around chapter 3. Your writing style is very similar to Stephenie's and you have the characters and dialogue exactly right.
The story itself is intriguing and exciting... I think I'm going to class this as a 5th part of the series, perhaps an alternative to books 2, 3 and 4! I honestly enjoyed your portrayal of the engagement and wedding much more than in the actual books... I always thought that Bella's shying away from marriage was a little *too* extreme! The only thing I was unsure of was Bella's special abilities - they seemed a little over the top.
Overall - excellently written, and telling as good a story as books 2, 3 and 4! You have carried on the relationships of everyone in the story really well... most impressive. Please write more! :-)
| Wittmer chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
You are amazing
| Amberjayde chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
This is one of the best fanfics i have ever read! it has a lot of different genres that i like, so this is the perfect story ever! Also the fact that it has to do with Twilight and Edward is even better! I have read this story more than 5 times!
| lily chapter 14 . 4/24/2009
oh, my God, this book was well-worth reading. you are a very good writer, i have to tell you this, and by the way, your English is very good, almost perfect. Thank you very much for thinking about writing this. It was absolutely beautiful. Thankk you again!
| lucy chapter 14 . 4/16/2009
this is the most beautiful fan fic i've every read, it made me cry. i love it and you are an amazing author, please keep writing, it is a rare and amazing skill that you seem to posess. best wishes
| black angel chapter 14 . 4/13/2009
Nightfall was great! i really hope u write more! i stayed up till 12:45 am exactly just to finish it! now im tired so tootles!
| XXXIlive4twilightXXX chapter 14 . 4/10/2009
It's a really good story, you should be a writer!
Sometimes I forget I'm reading from fanfiction, it's that good.
I was a bit sad when Jacob died but it was a great twist to the story, keep it up!
You should write another story.
| C.C.Unique chapter 14 . 4/8/2009
i really enjoyed this story. your an amazing writer!
| Sam604 chapter 14 . 4/7/2009
What a great story, you had me intrigued from the beginning with Bella's dreams. what a great twist to the story and Bella's powers where kick-ass. you did an incredible job.
| dvtwilightfan chapter 4 . 4/5/2009
OMG. I read the 1st two chapters and they are just as good as the books. I became a fan of Twiligt after seeing the movie this past March. Then I proceeded to read all four books in just a few weeks. I'm really enjoying reading the fanfiction now that I finished the books. I am also looking forward to the New Moon movie in November. This was the fist fanfiction I have read so far. So if you have written anything else I will be looking for it. If not can not wait till you do.
| rainbowjellyfish chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
I'm surprised that I never reviewed this! It's wonderful!
| deleteaccount001 chapter 3 . 3/30/2009
I really like the story so far but the one thing I hate is how dependent Bella is on Edward. There is a point in which a relationship becomes a bit clingy and desperate. However, I can understand how the pressure and such got to her and made her break down. Great story nonetheless, I can't wait to read the rest.
| Vicki chapter 14 . 3/27/2009
This was the first fan fiction that I have read on Twilight, and it was very good! Keep up the writing!
| prelude to the final moment chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
best twilight ff ever.
| chantel fernendes chapter 14 . 3/24/2009
WOW I finished watching the movie but have never read the books. I am planning to...anyway your fluff was very welcome and although it was"made up" its was fab! Your Insight into the characters and family relationships I enjoyed thoroughly. Perfect perfect perfect! Thank you