|Reviews for Nightfall|
| eboaden chapter 14 . 5/21/2009
adore this story! i love ur style of writing, its definitely got elements similar to that of stephanie meyer! cant wait for u to produce more work such as this... and by the way, i'm glad u killed off jacob! although the twilight saga wouldn't work without him, he's so anoying! Props to u black angel. you've got real talent!
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 5/16/2009
The only thing wrong with this chapter ios the fact that edward drank human blood. If he did his eyes would be red... not to mention he's a "vegetarian". You should change the line; "In case you hadn't noticed, my glass is filled with human blood." to " In case you have'nt noticed i'm drinking blood." Other Wise i love the story. I want to see whats goind to happen next so i have to end this comment.
| enczi578 chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
i can honestly say i enjoyed reading your story as much as i enjoyed the original twilight saga. good job:)
| Aniveria chapter 14 . 5/15/2009
wow...that was a lot of plot. And very complicated plot. i'm amazed you were able to write this and not get lost! it turned out really amazing!
| Amethystars chapter 14 . 5/14/2009
I am amazed and envious of your dedication and talent. Though I disliked some parts of the story (jacob killing himself was awful) overall I loved it. Well-written. I though it was great how you integrated some stuff from new moon but still went with everything you'd established as different. It was a nice blend. One of my favorite parts was the very end, with Lestat calling, It was really funny. Great story, thanks for sticking with it!
| twilightlvr12321 chapter 14 . 5/10/2009
dear black angel,
you are a great writer and I love this! its almost as good as stefiny myer her self! write as meny of these as you can there great!
| Cati chapter 14 . 5/8/2009
This story was great, it did have a few of those moments where it didn't make sense but otherwise it was very good. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read your next story.
| Carlisle060 chapter 14 . 5/4/2009
cannot belive you ended it!
i feel so sad :(
but i enjoyed your story!
| Carlisle060 chapter 8 . 5/3/2009
50 pages !
i cant write that much ,
but its incredible!
but i do wish that bella doesnt change so fast and like this ,
i dont know.
but i still like it!
| Carlisle060 chapter 5 . 5/3/2009
i love this story so much that im reviewing even though ur probably done the story!
| Carlisle060 chapter 3 . 5/3/2009
that is so romantic :)
| Carlisle060 chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
so intense and its the 1st chapter!
i love how bella is in a cast ,
the clumsy child she is!
| Wittmer chapter 14 . 5/1/2009
Thank you. Thank you so much for writing the best story I have ever read in my 10 years of fanfics. You are an incredible writer and the best I have ever seen. I hope you continue your career in writing these magnificent works of art. It was truly my pleasure and privilege to have read this. Thank you thank you thank you.
| Happyhannah chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Wow - that's all I can say!
I started reading this morning and have just finished now (dinner time) - exactly what I did when reading each of Stephenie Meyer's books!
This fanfic is utterly brilliant in every way. All of the characters have so much depth that I honestly forgot that I was reading something fan-written somewhere around chapter 3. Your writing style is very similar to Stephenie's and you have the characters and dialogue exactly right.
The story itself is intriguing and exciting... I think I'm going to class this as a 5th part of the series, perhaps an alternative to books 2, 3 and 4! I honestly enjoyed your portrayal of the engagement and wedding much more than in the actual books... I always thought that Bella's shying away from marriage was a little *too* extreme! The only thing I was unsure of was Bella's special abilities - they seemed a little over the top.
Overall - excellently written, and telling as good a story as books 2, 3 and 4! You have carried on the relationships of everyone in the story really well... most impressive. Please write more! :-)
| Wittmer chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
You are amazing