Reviews for Nightfall
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21/2012
You are a fantastic writter! When I read the first chapter I loved how you stayed true to the basic plot, and character traits. Reading the maverick blend of the "fluff" and suspenseful edge, was an amazing distraction from the out side world. Thank you for sharing your talent! From you notes I understand that you respect and value feedback. The only constant promblem I've noticed is the tranformation of non-plural to plural. I know that english is not your first launguage, and acknowledging
Chelsey Thomas chapter 14 . 7/10/2012
This is the best fanfiction book i have ever read. Keep writing like this and you will be as famus as stephenie meyer. thank you black angel
CarlisleCullen1640 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Sooo good!
Annabeth chapter 14 . 12/1/2011
I LOVE IT! I don't want it to end. I have stayed up till one in the morning for a week so i could finish it! Never ever stop writing you are amazing!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/2/2011
This was a great story. The love and romance and Edward and Bella was great to read and the last 3-4 chapters were hard to stop reading, I never expected a new legend, nor Jacob to die, I did not want to stop reading. You did a great job.
mintgil chapter 14 . 8/7/2011
amazing story
heyheyhey chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
wow! one of the best written fanfics i have ever read! lov it!
K chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Good job
Anonymous chapter 14 . 3/24/2011
Came across this by chance. Great story. The only critique I probably have is that when you change scenery, it's not always very clear (like in the section right before they get Bella drunk - the switch from the cafeteria to the Cullen house)... it's a little abrupt and my reading flow gets broken and I feel like I have to track back a little to make sure I didn't just skip over something. I wish you luck in your writing career. I look forward to maybe reading one of your publications someday :)
Allicat chapter 14 . 2/26/2011
I wanted to review every chapter but i couldn't stop reading. Your writting is to good. Hope you right more sometime!
ilovetaylorlautner chapter 6 . 2/15/2011
i didn't really like the dance part in this one...it's too weird to picture the cullens with costumes on
ilovetaylorlautner chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
this chapter made me laugh a lot! it was very funny and intense, i loved it!
sherimi chapter 14 . 2/15/2011
im sorry but this story was confusing
ilovetaylorlautner chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
i absolutely loved it! can't wait to read more!
tanishax chapter 14 . 1/30/2011
I can revview this chapter only i have review whole book so here iit goes this was better than sm she is still my fave u should write more stories and ur storie 2
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