Reviews for Nightfall
janieR chapter 14 . 12/17/2010
I thought you wrote a decent story,except for the spelling. It kept me wanting to read every day. Thanks, keep writing!
Fly-Gold chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
It was really exited story. I've read the story in Russian and can say that translation is very good.

I liked this characters, definetely. Your Edward and Bella are really like on Bella and Edward'characters of Stefanie (sorry for some mistakes - I'm Russia and I'm just studing English).

Thank you for the good story!

Nataly is very good translator :)

Dasha.
Sarah chapter 10 . 10/29/2010
Slashing his throat? Whaaaa?
Sarah chapter 9 . 10/28/2010
Aww, the Bella and Edward moments were so sad.

What's with the blue orb eyes?
Sarah chapter 6 . 10/28/2010
I love your fluff! Very cute Halloween costume idea!
Sarah chapter 5 . 10/28/2010
LOL. Love the line "...why are you invading Miss Swan's personal space?".

*Especially
sarah chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
Good chapter. I like fluff! I think you're english is very good- I wouldn't think you're ESL.
Sarah chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
Why is Bella's mom being such a b*tch? Could she not call Charlie to bring her home? But I like how Edward came to find her :)
BunniCutieGirl chapter 14 . 9/29/2010
OF COURSE IT WAS A PLEASURE TO READ!

YOU DEFINITELY SHOULD WRITE MORE!

sorry about the caps lock btw, i just wanted to prove my point.

it was a really good story, but it was kind of sad that instead of befriending the wolves, she was an enemy, and there was a war and all that...

will there ever be a second part to this story?
BunniGirl chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
holy crap that was awesome!

the writing style reminded me of twilight immediately

even though i havent read it in so long :D

i got a bit confused when she was taking a bath tho...

where did the cullen family suddenly come from?

wasnt she at her house? sorry it might just be my bad reading skills but i was reli confused in that part.
jessieleerox chapter 14 . 9/18/2010
just read your whole story! wow, that was amazing!
NatasaTwiLight3 chapter 14 . 9/5/2010
that was a great story! i really loved it!
Georgie chapter 14 . 8/14/2010
WOW that was AMAZING! how do you write so brilliantly? Its almost as good as twilight its self! you should totaly publish it! (after making it longer;)
Pheadra47 chapter 6 . 7/23/2010
Hey, loving the story so far, but I don't think Edward would drink human blood even though it's donated.

I think your spelling and grammar are very good for someone for whom English is a second language. There is just one error I would like to point out in the meadow scene, her meal would be a 'steak'- a piece of meat not a 'stake'- a sharpened piece of wood.

Keep up the good work :-)
Emmaa chapter 14 . 7/22/2010
Yeahh, your a great writer i loved this story ;) thanks.
1,701 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »