loved it

wow ur a reaaly gud writer ... with dialoges expressions everything... ur just realy gud :)

I thought you wrote a decent story,except for the spelling. It kept me wanting to read every day. Thanks, keep writing!

It was really exited story. I've read the story in Russian and can say that translation is very good.

I liked this characters, definetely. Your Edward and Bella are really like on Bella and Edward'characters of Stefanie (sorry for some mistakes - I'm Russia and I'm just studing English).

Thank you for the good story!

Nataly is very good translator :)

Dasha.

Slashing his throat? Whaaaa?

Aww, the Bella and Edward moments were so sad.

What's with the blue orb eyes?

I love your fluff! Very cute Halloween costume idea!

LOL. Love the line "...why are you invading Miss Swan's personal space?".

*Especially

Good chapter. I like fluff! I think you're english is very good- I wouldn't think you're ESL.

Why is Bella's mom being such a b*tch? Could she not call Charlie to bring her home? But I like how Edward came to find her :)

OF COURSE IT WAS A PLEASURE TO READ!

YOU DEFINITELY SHOULD WRITE MORE!

sorry about the caps lock btw, i just wanted to prove my point.

it was a really good story, but it was kind of sad that instead of befriending the wolves, she was an enemy, and there was a war and all that...

will there ever be a second part to this story?

holy crap that was awesome!

the writing style reminded me of twilight immediately

even though i havent read it in so long :D

i got a bit confused when she was taking a bath tho...

where did the cullen family suddenly come from?

wasnt she at her house? sorry it might just be my bad reading skills but i was reli confused in that part.

just read your whole story! wow, that was amazing!

that was a great story! i really loved it!

WOW that was AMAZING! how do you write so brilliantly? Its almost as good as twilight its self! you should totaly publish it! (after making it longer;)