Reviews for Enlightenment
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
Love how well they work Together when getting meals. She just comes in like she's always invited and start's pouring the wine. Its like they live together and having been for a while.

with those yummy pecs and biceps and L with the eyes in the cute little glasses – no wonder the girls can't help themselves. I so agree.

I love reading stories about how Bling first hears about Max and Manticore. And his way of dealing with it was very good. He needed time to get his head around it and really understand it. Then ask questions after he has hold on it.
nattylovesu chapter 3 . 6/13/2009
lovee the bling perspective,
shywr1ter chapter 2 . 4/30/2009
ha! How in the world did I miss reviewing and miss seeing that you'd updated the story of our mutual hero even into a 3d chapter? I remember this chapter (as in skimming in a hurry) and owe you a big *sorry* for not reviewing sooner.

Lovin' this; love that Bling's first question to Max was if she was okay, if they hurt her... (way to go, big guy!) I was also impressed that you managed to work in a certain Mary Sue for the cuddling parts! ;}

Gotta save the last installment for when I'm not running off (as now) but so good to see that this went on to more Bling and the gang goodness - come back and visit with more fic sometime, now that you ought to be thawing out a bit!
gypsydoggy10 chapter 3 . 10/4/2007
Hey girl-long time no chat-congrats on finishing this, and nicely done!

Hope all's well on the Last Frontier-br!

Mari83 chapter 3 . 9/11/2007
"Between Max's revelation and Maria's offer to spend the night, he was not his usual calm, cool and collected self."

Oh, really…:-)Made me laugh.

“No; makes it harder to jump ten stories and land on my feet too, but I avoid that if I'm having a particularly bad time of it. Fortunately, that's not too often”

Sounds just like the down-playing approach I can see with Max in such a situation.

"they didn't think about the fact that sleeping is when your body regulates a lot of things, like serotonin production,"

I’ve never thought of it, but this makes so much sense ( and also is revealing of how Manticore only thinks about their experiments as refitting DNA, not as humans and the consequences for their lives). Great thought! I wonder how else her hormones would be influenced by the lack of a normal sleep pattern and what they willingly changed in that area.
jfg207 chapter 2 . 2/18/2007
Well with the discussion with himself does he ask what kind of meds she on and what do she get when her condition acts up? Do you have an idea as to kind of assignments Logan put Bling and Max through? Like for example, there is an mission where Max saves Bling life with her strength and speed and visa versa with Bling saving Max when on a mission she goes into a seizure, like that.

lkaplon chapter 2 . 12/15/2006
Okay, lets try this again. This is the second time I've tried to post a review for this story, but either ffn is having issues or my internet is having issues.

I've always wondered how Bling found out about Max. I've said it before and I'll say it again, why couldn't you have been writing the show?

Can't wait for the update!
Mystic25 chapter 2 . 8/15/2006
Love the story.

You've commented me on mine enough, so I thought it was high time I returned the favor.

I love the fact that you gave us a bit more insight into Bling's past, love the fact that he has a girl, he's a bit too pretty to be single.

My fav line from the fic: “Next time you decide to do drugs, spend a little extra and get the good crack.” (lol)

good stuff.


Mari83 chapter 2 . 8/1/2006
Great idea to bring in that anonymous report Logan mentioned in the Pilot.

Like how Max is insecure about Bling’s reaction not only because what it would mean for herself but also for Logan’s relation to Bling and how Logan has a more optimistic (and more naïve?) view of Bling.

I guess I prefer Bling’s way of thinking things over once (and then probably sticking with it) over Logan suddenly deciding he can’t trust Max anymore in “Pollo Loco”.
annie200 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
How did i miss this? It's a great start..would really like to see the rest appearing soon...
Babyangel86 chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
hehe.. cheeky max...

Good stuff...

MY-LOVE-IS-STRONG chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Excellant keep up the good work. My computer does not take gmail at all so that's the only problem with the emailing thing.
angela-v chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Great! I love how Max is going to make Logan sweat it out. And I love this (among many other things) "He'd have a better shot at getting into my pants than getting me to tell my secrets."
BlueAngel137 chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Great start!

I'm dying to know how Bling reacts when Max tells him about Manticore.

lilmouse chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
Great start! :)

Logan and Max interact very well. Bling does seem like a natural choice but I can see how Max would have concerns.

After all, being cautious has kept her alive and free for many years now.

Liked the Tai Chi and shadow sparring. Good to see her training and why not at the Space Needle?

Looking forward to more!


Mouse :)
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