Reviews for The Price of Love
joebthegreat chapter 7 . 5/28/2006
ok...

You need to make more paragraphs and stop just making one huge dense square of text. It's a rule of grammar that you have to make a new paragraph every time someone speaks. There are few exceptions to this rule, and they arn't in this story.

This is still a great story. I just wanted to say something worthwhile for once.
joebthegreat chapter 6 . 5/24/2006
good... good...

wonderfully greatly amazingly good...

this deserves more reviews... but it seems everyone's lost interest in this game...

yeah...

in ANY other genre you would have likely gotten at least 20-30 reviews by now...
joebthegreat chapter 5 . 5/22/2006
nice and fast...

I notice you dont accept anonnymous reviews... I was gonna sign it anyway but yeah... I still noticed that...

love the suspence. The two huge paragraphs at the end kind of annoyed me but it wasn't anything that would ruin a great story like this.
joebthegreat chapter 4 . 5/19/2006
dang... two chapters up EXTREMELY fast...

good job on them too.
joebthegreat chapter 2 . 5/16/2006
so what's the price of love then?

is it $7.50?

anyway, that was a cool little beginning, and I seem to be the only one interested in any of these fanfiction stories so...

keep writing... do it for ME man!