|Reviews for Memphis Skyline|
| Anti-Logic chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Cute, and just a little tint of foreshadowing angst. Good.
| nksa chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
I really liked this. It seemed very in character to me, great job.
| cherry-s-twin chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
lol if only i was there...
hmm... vodka makes the world go round...
so does Hughes...
| BlueTulip chapter 1 . 11/6/2006
Pretty funny...I agree with BeautifulSilverSilence, sounds like how a drunk!Maes and drunk!Roy would sound. I liked Hughes pouring the vodka and almost missing the glass entirely. XD And I like that you have this part:
"'But, Roy. If something happens to me, you’ll look after them, right?'
'Don’t be stupid. You’re the one taking care of me, right?'"
Good bit of dramatic irony.
One little error: “_That’s it_, if Hawkeye lets me, Colonel.” I think it should be "That is." Though, seeing as they're drunk, it might not be an error at at all.
| anamariewrites chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
That was a nice little fic, sounds like how I think a
drunk!Maes and drunk!Roy would sound. I'm honestly surprised you didn't have a review, it deserves one.