|Reviews for Day|
| OkashiraShinomori chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
Y'know, I had a suspicion when Sain started talking about the two of them walking about, and then you go and confirm it with Kent's little creation at the end. As it's listed in a shoujo-ai C2, I'm fairly hopeful it won't become LynKent, but I'd much rather see another chapter (hint hint) in which this is proven solidly.
Rather well done, on a more mechanical note. There were a few extraneous words, but everything else seemed well in order. Keep it up!
| The Darklight Angel chapter 1 . 8/29/2006
So...damn...freaking...CUTE! I love Lyn/Florina! Too bad Kent, Lyn's already taken!
| black dragon of destruction chapter 1 . 3/13/2006
this was a pretty cool story