Reviews for Lament
Honeybusciut93 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Wow breathless words cannot explain but it'sbeautiful especially from vals pov great job
Songbird of the End chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aw, how sweet...and gory. Favs.
mystery writer5775 chapter 1 . 7/18/2007
wow i really liked it, you have a lalent in poetry, maybe you should consider doing more of it
A. Minamino chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Wow. That's all I can say. That was wonderfull. It was beautiful. I'm putting it on my favorites list.
Sasia chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Well, my jaw basically just hit the floor. This sounds almost exactly like Jeramiad in poem form. GREAT JOB!
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Looks like someone's muses aren't leaving her alone. ;)

Intreguing poem. I liked the pace, but I did find it strange that some sentences seemed to rhyme, and others didn't. *shrug*
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
That...That...

That was so sad. It was beautiful. I loved it. You definitely have poetry skillz.

Great job. Great, great job.
dArkliTe-sPirit chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Aw...this was really good. The figurative kanguage was excellent. And I loved how you describedthe difference between Dan and Danny. Anyone who flames you, let me know...and, well, let's just say I can steal Dan's thermos... :D
Sleep Warrior chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
...Wow, that was intense. And amazing. Never stop writing poetry, that was great. I really got sucked into it, it flew by so quickly, yet not quickly enough. I need a tissue...keep writing.!