|Reviews for Across the Ocean|
| cburns19 chapter 4 . 1/6
I love this story who cares if a human/hylian likes a bird/rito
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/24/2013
I've enjoyed this since the beginning and i would appreciate it if you continue
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/13/2013
Great story... But is that the end?
| great story chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I love the story and am wondering if you will update it soon as well as we're you got the idea from apart from the actual game of zelda windwaker. Oh and what if medli and the korok could make copies of themselves and people around them like medli making a stalfos.
| XL-Zero chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
Ummmmm, nice job? xD
But really i got hooked since the prologue, your doing a good job with this fanfic xD, cant really find things in particular you should work for the better. The only thing i can say that if you wanna create a more serious story, try expanding a little more your vocabulary and give more descriptions to the things around.
| Steveaaml chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
This was so great! I liked how you had Dark Link in the shadow temple, and Gyorg in the water temple. Great use of every bit of the zelda mythology. Great characters. Wish there were more to read.
| Steveaaml chapter 6 . 10/6/2013
My favourite bit was that Medli had some fancy riddles and real dangers, and Link was stuck with some lame block-pushing puzzle.
| Steveaaml chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
This is awesome! So invested. I hope Tetra stays cool and helpful, despite her feelings for Link.
| VentusBrawler chapter 9 . 8/13/2013
quite an interesting tale you have going on, with accuracy and creativity mixed together. could use an update after 4 years? haha. you've probably retired and won't come back to finish, but it was good work for an incomplete.
| awesomeman398 chapter 9 . 11/1/2012
And now that I have an account I can't wait for the next chapter!
| awesomeman398 chapter 9 . 10/31/2012
Awesome story make more chapters please!
| Base10 chapter 9 . 6/20/2012
Hi, I've been an avid reader of your stories as of late, and I must say, this is an impressive work of art. Like any good story, it leaves me itching for more when I reach the end.
I was wondering if you're updating this story anymore. Would it be foolish of me to assume you still are, given that your last story update was in '08, last time I checked? Not to mention this story was updated in '06 too...
I mean this in all sincerity and certainly mean no offense.
| cody1989 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Hello, my name is Cody. I just got finished reading your Zelda Fanfiction story "Across the Ocean"
I liked it very much. I have to say, it was a very well written and thought out story. You did an incredible job.
You wrote the story exactly as if it was continued from the end of the "Wind Waker" The characters personalities stayed the same, and you added a little extra to the story, but kept the same attributes as the Zelda game. "A perfect continuation" Is what I would describe it as. :) I enjoyed it very much. You are a very good writer. Thank you very much.
| Giygas.PK.Godot chapter 9 . 2/18/2011
great history my teo favourite Games combined in a great history but sadly u haven't uploaded in almost 5 years :( I wish u could upload and finish this history plz well have a nice day , great history and sorry for my English LOL
| AirshipHead chapter 9 . 6/14/2010
Absolutely sublime from start to finish. Incredibly well written :D This story is now in my Medli Link community :D