|Reviews for Watching Over Her|
| Giulietta Marescotti chapter 14 . 7/30/2012
Omg! This is incredible! LOVE IT!
| Stokes-CSI3 chapter 14 . 8/21/2008
| DongBangShinKi chapter 14 . 8/13/2007
The story over all is really god. One thing though, Tonite is spelt t-o-n-i-g-h-t. Just I think that was the only spelling error. But really, It was awesome.
| JackO'NeillIsTheMan chapter 14 . 4/1/2007
Really good story!
| Poison's Ivy chapter 14 . 1/31/2007
Oh yea! I knew Jamie was the one who died.
But the whole building up the suspense thing was pure evil - good job.
I love the "Nice rock. Who gave you that?" Reminds me of someone... I would have done the same thing - hitting him. :P
That was such a cute ending line. It didn't ruin it at all. (Which is something I have a problem with - unfortunately)
Wow! I finished reviewing a whole story - from beginning to end. (Cept, you weren't updating... it was already updated... aw. :P)
Live in Love (I like that line.. I should use it more)
| Poison's Ivy chapter 13 . 1/31/2007
Jamie doesn't only have an obsessive problem, he's insane! He seriously talks to himself. (So THAT'S how they do it - I never knew)
I... think (hope) that it was the police (NICK) who shot Jamie. I mean, she why would she lean her head forward if they didnt have a clear shot?
| Poison's Ivy chapter 12 . 1/31/2007
Aw: "If anyone would marry Sara, it'd be him" That's so SWEET!
Make him propose. As soon as he find her (which won't happen because 1) she'll need medical attention probably and 2) you've already written this story... completely... hm)
"We wait" - that line sucks.
What? It does!
:P Yea, acting like a psycho. Gonna leave.
| Poison's Ivy chapter 11 . 1/31/2007
So it's Jamie. Ah. KILL HIM! (no)
There's so much tension. It seems like something that would be in the show (if the producers had some brains and put Sara and Nick together, but No... *Scoffs* - Let's not tell them I said that).
That's terrible - the blood I mean. Let them think of something else that happened... like her getting hurt.
He's such a pervert too.
| Poison's Ivy chapter 10 . 1/31/2007
Ok, the "Melbourne Beach" answered my previous question somewhere in a previous review. No need to answer it.
I love Nick (Who doesn't?)
Haha "You're breaking up, Cath" - that's funny.
The "huge no-no" got me laughing.
| Poison's Ivy chapter 9 . 1/31/2007
Oh God, I hate him. He's a psycho freak. "Knows her since she was young". Right. But what happened to San Francisco's pictures? Did he not know her then?
Ah... confusion is a bitch.
And you didn't tell us who the culprit was. *cries* - I'll find out anyway.
| Poison's Ivy chapter 8 . 1/31/2007
*Scoffs* Flirting at every chance he got is right. Like I said, they flirt so much in the show.
I seriously still think that the serial killer is trying to make the victims look like Sara (brown hair, brown eyes - it's not that hard to figure out)
Short review, but oh well.
I think the culprit should be someone in the story. A random person out of nowhere ruins it. (It does, trust me)
| Poison's Ivy chapter 7 . 1/31/2007
K, sorry bout the gap. Had to leave. Anyway:
Oh my God... this is... oh my god. So suspenseful! (Am I spelling that wrong?)
Oh my God, abuse relationships are terrible. Sometimes they're even worse when your abuser is like... your lover. You have to make a hard choice.
Oh my God... (yes, that's my "words of the day".
Who doesn't want to know a spoiler? (Ok, there are people like that... fine)
| Poison's Ivy chapter 6 . 1/28/2007
Wait, you mean I was right about me being wrong about the bomb?
What? *shrugs it off* :P
Shouldnt they be wondering WHY there was a bomb anyway?
Ahem. Brown hair dye and brown eyes serial killer being Sara's stalker.
*scoffs* About time they kissed. :P
| Poison's Ivy chapter 5 . 1/28/2007
Aw, the scene at the beginning was VERY nice.
About time Warrick broke up with her.
I bet the bomb is like... a drill. Not even real.
Watch me be wrong.
| Poison's Ivy chapter 4 . 1/28/2007
Oh my God, I got so freaked out! How dare you (no, i'm only joking)
Aw... Nick and Sara...
Gonna stop before I make lovey-dovey sounds. *shudders* (JK)
BTW, I remember one of the episodes they flirted in. Cant remember the name, but the one where Sara had to re-enact the death of a woman who fell in her tub thanks to a rack and died of drowing even though her husband did it? Ring a bell?
I refuse to comment on the last note.