Reviews for Arena
TalkingMime chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
Nicely written and an interesting reflection on the state of humanity in Inverloch. It works itself nicely into the Inverloch universe without touching the main story.
bywthedragon chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Woah. That was good. You really got Berard down! I'm very impressed, and That's generally hard to do. I tend to be a tough critic, but this... was a whole lot better than I've come to expect form in general. keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
very nicely done.
Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Oh wow! Great job. Good use of words and the action is really well done. Makes you think you are there. But at least we know that Berard finally gets his. Makes the story all the sweeter. Great job!
WoLfBoY538 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Wow.. All I can say is wow.. That was beutifully written, good action. But I wish there had been a happier ending. *sniff*
krycalex chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Scary... very scary... I like it! :) You write beautifully!