Reviews for Unmasked
Mirage chapter 3 . 7/17/2016
poor Neji but hinata is right, he atleast needs to tell him. when nor then nothing will hold naruto when he gets an offer for peace and him going to itachi...but when he had an Lover he would have something to fight more...

hope you come back one day to finish this story
Empress Tatiana chapter 3 . 10/29/2014
don't tell me it ends here it was so good everybody wants a piece of naruto's GOODIE'S #fangirling
Demoninmysoul chapter 3 . 5/20/2012
I wish you would pick this up! It's a rare to see a story so well written, but you didn't continue writing it!

I love your portray of the characters, the situation, and that we see it from Hinata's point of view.

Thanks for writing it so far, I just wish you didn't stop at such a sad point, leaving the feeling of hopelessness.
unwanted- angel chapter 2 . 9/8/2009
i was sort of surprized, when neji started talking to hinata; i thought he was going to say how much he loved naruto, confess, guess i was wrong...
unwanted- angel chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
aw,neji-sama. u've fallen in love with naruto,dense, dense naruto.
harrylover101 chapter 3 . 7/4/2009
i love it so hurry up and update!
Pepe Le Pew chapter 3 . 11/4/2008
A very well written story, with an interesting plot line. I hope you update soon.
Pwyllugh chapter 3 . 6/16/2008
this was so sad...

but I guess this story won't be continued...

but hope dies last

maybe... in a distand time...

I really liked your writing... ya know! It is very good and i enjoeyed to read it!
Lunacom chapter 3 . 10/8/2007
So much drama! Please continue.
nm1716 chapter 3 . 8/29/2007
I love the story. Please update soon.
Carcas chapter 3 . 8/24/2007
that was very good, I like your writing style.
Ash of Mine chapter 3 . 4/11/2007
poor, poor Neji...

Tell me there's going to be a happy end...
KuronueObsessed chapter 3 . 1/6/2007
Oh god! TT-TT Please update... *insert sob story here* TTTT TT-TT
cheerful-pinkstar chapter 3 . 12/2/2006
Man, this is so sad. But to heck with it. I'm hooked. Update soon! I really like how Hinata is. and Neji is really interesting... And Naruto is still oh so cool. I like how Sasuke makes such a stupid mistake, and that you make Sakura sounds so horrible. but I like.
RandomTopic chapter 3 . 11/14/2006
I like this. Although there's this typo that bugs me.

“Doesn’t he deserve the right to make his own choice? Don’t you own him as least that Neji?"

'own' in the second question should be 'owe'. Most typos aren't very distracting, but this one made me read it a couple of times before I got it.
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