Reviews for For the One You Love
hpbecky04 chapter 10 . 1/30/2010
I like your story very much. I think it was the secert reletionship theirs. I cant wait to read what is next.
Lily chapter 10 . 1/24/2010
Cool story! It's very well written. A pet peeve of mine is idiots who don't know how to type, but you are very good!

Please update soon :D
Engraved-Angel chapter 8 . 1/10/2010
Okay, so I must say, you're story is really good, and I can't wait for the next update.

And the people who don't review this are evil.

- Write more soon please.

~Engravedangel
Nez chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
"Ichi no wa Ai Ko"...? "One of [missing subject] Love [meaningless syllable]"?

You couldn't make it more obvious that you have no idea of Japanese at all.

I'd suggest you learn the language before simply translating word for word (or worse: taking what some translator program suggests. Most of them are crap.)

Stick to the English title. That, at least, makes sense.
KyoHana chapter 2 . 4/6/2006
Love will certainly make you distracted, but in Hiei's case, it could (and did almost) prove deadly. I wonder what he's going to ask Yusuke - and how will Yusuke respond? The next chapter should be interesting - as indeed, this one was.

Glad that you seem to be over your writer's block!
KyoHana chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
WOW! This is SOME beginning, and I for one, am anxious to see where you plan to take it from here because, if this chapter is any indication, this story is going to be terrific.