Reviews for Quest of the Keys
Magmortar chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
To let know it's not a copy of your story it has a different story line same 8 characters with the add 6 new ones the chapter I'm doing is Bloom the winx club character with a different love interest for her is Ants the male fairy of fire and grass oc don't know when would I get it finished maybe tomorrow to let you know.
NeoMiniTails chapter 7 . 10/9/2006
Compliments, first:

It was interesting... kept me reading...

I loved teh beginning with Kikyo...

Had many funny parts

Loved Inu and Asuka laughing hard...

Criticism:

I won't say much, it is late for one thing and you pretty much would know what I would say about this chapter, grammatically. Though, better than older chapters in that particular area, there were many deficiencies.

Sesshomaru and Kikyo were OOC (out of character)/

Though interesting, it had a kindergartenish look to me... it seemed to rush from one scene to another... and Sesshy was just not the real Sesshy.

I, somewhat, feel Kari and ash have fallen much too fast and much of this chapter I couldn't imagine really happening...

Amd, Ash wouldn't have been able to catch the arrow and throw it at kagura... for one thing, if it did happen, it would no longer have teh same effect as it would when Kikyo does it...

And if he would've done that technique, it would've cut his hands and then slip out of that and rigt to his heart... he would've been better off with Pikachu thundershocking it...

Ash and pokemon parts seemed a bit overdone...

Koga wouldn't know what a high five is...

Sorry for more criticism than compliments... but anyways, it seems like its going to be good. Still lovin' it!

Until Next Time,

:D Smile,

Neo
Cylon One chapter 13 . 8/16/2006
Way to go. This is a great chapter. All those upgrades the good guys got are very cool. I rather expected Ash himself to ask if his Pokemon were okay after he was merged with them. Thanks for the good job on this.
Star Holder Commander chapter 18 . 8/12/2006
The only thing i can say is, make a sequal. You did great, but what happens next?
wildrook chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
I just surf the internet looking for good stories that match my intrests, then I came across yours. That's how find many other stories in my favorites.
Star Holder Commander chapter 17 . 8/10/2006
you know, this story is great, oh and as a sneek peek of my chapter four, i can tell you that the Transformers and the Light Speed Rescue Power Rangers are involved.
Victor Garza chapter 17 . 8/9/2006
I'm not sure but this feels somewhat from Zelda. But it's a good chapter though.
Victor Garza chapter 16 . 8/8/2006
Ok..what to pretty WEIRD. Anyway I read the rest of this story, Not bad at all. Well later.
Star Holder Commander chapter 16 . 8/8/2006
very good job on this chapter. I love how you used all of ash's pokemon.
Gundamknight chapter 15 . 8/3/2006
this is so cool and I mean that in the most sincerest way because it has my favorite animes and plus some others that I am not very familiar.

your fellow author,

GK
Star Holder Commander chapter 15 . 8/3/2006
great chapter Pete. nI'm gald this story is back on track. I need some advice how ever, do i have just Armogedo moytimon or do i use all three of his forms in the atack
Star Holder Commander chapter 14 . 5/31/2006
you must write more. you must. this has been a great story so far
Dea chapter 14 . 5/20/2006
O, creepy chapter, but I loved it.
Dea chapter 13 . 5/12/2006
Another great chapter. I just loved it.
Star Holder Commander chapter 13 . 5/12/2006
i like what you have done, good work. However,my cherecter has one green eye and one orenge eye. he all so has white hair and is very skinny.
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