Reviews for EverAfter, Book One: Illusions
James the Fox chapter 2 . 2/28/2007
Nice intro, and very good alteration of the Wind Waker battle with Gannondorf. I've also read Song of the Seagulls, and I wait patiently for the next chapter in both of these stories!
Araknia the Storyspinner chapter 2 . 5/3/2006
Great story! Update soon, please!
Sylvia Viridian chapter 2 . 3/19/2006
How fascinating...a prophecy, hm?

And such a cute scene, afterward, with all of them. Well done!
KivaEmber chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Very good, explains it very well. Kinda like what Bakura says about Justice and good actually...
Sylvia Viridian chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I've often found it so; the truest evil is wilful ignorance, and it's something most people are guilty of, at some point. I surely am.

To truly become a being of good, I am coming to realize, you must seek to understand everything you wish to shun, and very few can manage this consistently. People call me good because I shun so few, but goodness is not found in that inclination, merely selfishness; I generally tend to gain pleasure from the happiness of others, and so making people happy is for me a form of hedonism. But I neglect and shun those who commit crimes that I cannot forgive. I am not strong enough to seek understanding of them of my own accord, and thus I am in my own way as bad as anyone else who views another life as less than worthy. To be good, you must be wise, and to be wise, you must embrace even the most painful truths, such as the fact that those we consider evil were once innocent children, and later misguided individuals who no one bothered to set straight. Even Hitler thought he was doing good...

I think you must be the gentlest and kindest person I know.
Ri2 chapter 1 . 3/6/2006

Wow, that was deep. And very, very confusing.

How is suicide an act of greed?