Reviews for The Moment in the Middle
Guest chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Interesting first chapter!
rockinsox13 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
This is how it should have ended please finish!
alis chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
hay !

q lindo !

deleted2012 chapter 5 . 6/8/2008
*sob sob*

i guess you were right though, to have cree bawling would be a tragic scene, but the single tear captures her emotions perfectly.

well done, a good story!
Nonamenonamenonameplease chapter 5 . 9/15/2006
First, huh? Looks to me like you got it right the second time around. In fact, they should've turned this into an episode. Can kids and teenagers really get along? I say YES! I myself didn't used to think much about children until I started watching C:KND. Congratulations, Tom Warburton, you really switched it around. Now I simply LOVE children. And congratulations to you, RadiantBeam, for such superb writing.
dragen95 chapter 5 . 8/1/2006
wow that was good

(not sarcastic)
dragen95 chapter 2 . 8/1/2006
well she was like 11 wen the epsode bout murice(sp?) right then 3 years later he was "decomissoned" so i'd so 14
a really random reviewer chapter 5 . 7/19/2006
oh crud... i think i was about to cry... crud... it was really good, but in the begining, the scenes were kinda fuzzy, well not really. In those very short chapters, you portrayed emotions that some people would take chapters to dwell upon. good job!
GoldenFlither chapter 5 . 3/22/2006
You know how disappointed I was when I realized that I was missing out on the best sisterhood story I'd ever seen? You are an absolutely amazing author! Can't wait to read more from you!
elodrie chapter 5 . 3/11/2006
That was beautiful. 'nuff said.



You're on my favourites now.
N2hobbes chapter 5 . 3/11/2006
Beautiful chapter! It was very well written and the song you used fit perfectly! Great job! :D
elodrie chapter 4 . 3/11/2006

I like this. It's very good.

N2hobbes chapter 4 . 3/10/2006
Awesome! I think you wrote Cree's reaction well. I hope to read more soon. :)
N2hobbes chapter 3 . 3/10/2006
Great chapter! Very intense! :D
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