|Reviews for Time Warp|
| shh.quiet in the library chapter 7 . 1/14/2007
It's great that you try, but babblefish is not your friend. Trust me.
Tu dois attendre.
Amélie, où es-tu?
Comment vas-tu? Je t’aime bien. J’adore ton premier et ton deuxième nom...Je vais te voir demain! Est-ce que c'est bien?
Je t'aime/Je t'adore/Tu es mon amour.
Où êtes-vous allées?
“Mes amies et mon petit ami.
“Ton petit ami?”
“Tu t’appelles comment?”
| shh.quiet in the library chapter 6 . 1/14/2007
those class periods are ridiculusly short. you don't have to give a play by play of everything said.
| shh.quiet in the library chapter 5 . 1/14/2007
how does harry have all his stuff with him? did he carry around huge masses of pictures while fighting voldermort?
| shh.quiet in the library chapter 4 . 1/14/2007
not 'do you have any questions about the class, the rules, spells giving you difficulties...?' where did humble harry go?
| sanrimjmsn.com chapter 26 . 12/14/2006
youre not eveil
| raymond chapter 15 . 12/14/2006
where did you get garce from...
wasnt anne with leon first?
| raymond chapter 10 . 12/14/2006
james shouldnt sell himself short like that! and if lilly dont want to go public because it means thats she will have been wrong on somthing then she doesnt deserve anyone to like her shallow small minded hypocrtical worthless bitch...and james is a desparate pathetic fool for setteling for a second rate superficous fictitios based ond lies 'relationship' with a girl whos hated him for years and is ashamed of him...if i was harry i would be disgusted in both my parents for coming to gether under such circumstances
| raymond chapter 7 . 12/14/2006
no offence but why bother with all the french if you now youll immeadiately have to translate it back into english... also how does ginny know french when harry doesnt they when to the same school and no offence to the weaslys but they are generally pretty cluless about things outside their own world which would be the burrow and the british magical society, the only ones with a genuine outside interest are arthur who is interested in life without magic. and the twins who find that muggle ways of doing thing (minly mischeif making) help them get around the no magic under age laws and come in handy when dealing with purebloods who are generaly clueless
still lovin the fic
| raymond chapter 1 . 12/14/2006
there are only THREE unforgivables and only ONE of them gives off light...
lets see what coluor is the Killing curse?
loving the sory by the way didnt mean to be rude...the i always though ginny made it rther obvious that she loved harry
| Lady Emmalene chapter 8 . 12/5/2006
I like the story as an overall, but I do not like this 'Leon' person. I think that last chapter I read(ch.8) was a bit sappy and overdramatic and repetative. I know that you are done with it and might not care about my review about something you wrote so long ago, but here you have it.
| BattleWizard chapter 40 . 11/25/2006
The final chapter... I didn't even know you updated! Well, congrats on finishing the story!
| Im not on this site anymore chapter 9 . 11/23/2006
That was so confusing...
| Starlit jewel chapter 40 . 11/22/2006
What? You ended with a cliff hanger? No! You're not supposed to do that! But anyways, great job on this story! It's really really good. Though you might want to add something to distinguish between the past and future Dumbledores. And I hope that Ginny doesn't get bitten. Oh well, the story is in your hands! Keep writing and have a Happy Thanksgiving! -Starlit Jewel
| Anonymoose chapter 9 . 11/21/2006
A cute story. Instant messengers weren't really used back in the 1970's probably.
| DeadAccount80 chapter 40 . 11/17/2006